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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 8 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow
And y’all, you’re able to like, give me critiques for these. I just meant I didn’t need super precise, line-by-line edits since I’m going to rewrite this stuff eventually. So if you have input, please share it.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 9 hours ago
@whalekeeper @koshka That whole “where does Dante go?” discussion was very amusing to read.
He doesn’t actually want to kill anyone, but he’s a walking disaster so the middle works, lol
Rory totally looks like a cinnamon roll. I mean, I haven’t seen a picture of him, but he totally gives off cinnamon roll vibes
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 9 hours ago
Gonna go off what I remember from my sister’s broken hand, although I understand that this isn’t broken, broken.
Leo
“Yes, deep breaths, and lean back.” Leo helped him settle back against the couch. “I’ll patch you up and get you some meds. Try to relax if you can.”
Leo started unwrapping the fabric strips around…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 days, 10 hours ago
Another sign find. Immediately thought of you XD
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 10 hours ago
Barnes
”Take deep breaths, kid,” Barnes said from in the living room. “Sit on the floor or table.”
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 10 hours ago
@ellette-giselle He definitely acts like a cinnamon roll, very sensitive, so I figured he belongs in the ‘looks like cinnamon roll, might kill you’ category XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 10 hours ago
Leo
He offered Barnes grateful smile. “Thank you, especially for your help today. Feel free to help yourself to anything in the kit. There’s some compression ice packs and…stuff.” he shuffled through for a large gauze pack and sat on the table in front of Rory. He brushed sweat slicked hair out of the boy’s face…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 11 hours ago
Is Rory’s knee busted? He did get thrown out of the way of a car in concrete.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 11 hours ago
She’s like naaaaaaahhh 😂😂
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 11 hours ago
Barnes
Barnes waved a hand for Rory to get patched up first, and stretched to take some paper from the nearby table. “Working with Leo at the school sounds good, I can accept that. As long as I can keep tabs on all registered students. I’ll leave my office number here.”
This had been an extremely painful fiasco…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 11 hours ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @rae @ellette-giselle @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @smiley @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else-idk
Snippet of a future probable scene for The Bois’ book
(and I promise Leo isn’t usually this harsh. He’s just going through a lot when this scene takes place and running off of very little…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 12 hours ago
Okay, I’m going to move things along a bit because I feel sorry for these poor charies. Feel free to insert whatever you want. =)
Leo
“Good.” His smile widened at the relief in the boy’s eyes. Then he let the smile fade to pull out his no-nonsense voice. “Now that that’s settled, you two need patched up. Like…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 days, 12 hours ago
@ellette-giselle Thank you! :3
AND AHHHHH I CAN’T WAIT TO HEAR WHAT YOU THINK OF IT😭✨
The second oldest is Joshua 😉 Jakob is the one in the middle who ends up marrying Angelina (Riker’s sister). (From left to right they are: Leo, Joshua, Jakob, Reuben (Reuben is @mineralizedwritings‘s tho💜😂), and Wolfgang)
I’ll be sure to tag you!…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 days, 12 hours ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 (I think you’ll wanna see this😜) @rae @ellette-giselle @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @smiley @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else-idk
✨The Bois Aesthetic/Moodboard✨
Also consider this my announcement that, though it’s not my main main project, I have officially began drafting The Bois’…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 13 hours ago
Do you think the one with Sabina at the grave could be worked in as her memory/recap when she’s in the bedroom, or does it seem out of place.
Let me reread this.
I think this is fine. There is no harm in including an illustration of a flashback. I’ve seen it done before, such as in North! Or be Eaten when Podo is telling his ta…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 13 hours ago
Leo
“Ah, sixteen. I was twelve when I was apprenticed to…to my mentor, but you’re not too old. None of the creeps ever came down to the basement, and if they do try it, it’s not like they’re nothing we can’t handle. Besides,” a grin broke out on his face. “It’ll give me an excuse to wear my suit to work.” Memories…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 13 hours ago
Leo
He sighed and glanced down at his mug. Empty.
“The school is certainly… complicated. How about we just…” His gaze drifted from Barnes to Rory. Bruises, cuts, scuffs. Rory seemed to be favoring one knee. Barnes, her arm. Leo traced the pattern on the side of his mug.
Yes, Rory could fight. Barnes could too…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 14 hours ago
Thanks!
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Andrew replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 14 hours ago
It’s a camp up in up-state New York and I’m going to be working there the whole summer.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 14 hours ago
These look fine as well, finished or not.
Which scene is Joseph and Eric from?
I think that version of Beric does work better.
Also, I think I like the second wedding option better.
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