Ellette Giselle

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Four new chapters today! 😳

Don’t feel like you have to read them all right away if you don’t have time. This is the end of Part 2.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Here is a link to some feedback questions I would appreciate if you could take the time to answer  for TNPT II:
The Sword Feedback – 1st Draft (In Microsoft Word)

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So my cat Marbles had 6 kittens who are now almost two weeks old and I can’t think of names I like for any of them. I will be going back to the update where i last asked for help naming…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Sorry for the wait. But Chapter the 42nd is out!

And this concludes The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword! Thank you for reading! I’ll get some feedback questions ready soon!

@ellette-giselle Nope! Nothing that I saw, anyway.

@ellette-giselle

I do agree with the people who commented on the end of this last chapter; there probably should be some more context before they teach him how to fight.

But I liked the training sessions. 🙂

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters!

@grcr

Whatever feedback, I guess. People might ask for something specific, but other than that, it’s up to you. I’m just trying to set things up so that people can be motivated to write and have people to talk to about it, I don’t care exactly what people want to do.

@ellette-giselle

Ok!

@koshka @whalekeeper @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin @whalekeeper

Okay, I have divided us up into who will give feedback to who. This is split up as well as I could so that everyone gets to read something their interested in, but other than that it’s random.

If the data I’ve received is accurate, there are actually…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Interesting. Are these the rebels?

I have no idea how Jonathan didn’t get shot, but good chapters.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Chapter the 41st out!

Only one or two more chapters after this.

@ellette-giselle

Lolol.

See, I told you, people throw books across the room. If you had ended it there, definitely a book throwing moment.

@ellette-giselle

True.

I don’t know what I expected, but I wasn’t very surprised that the boy fought him. 314 must have been the exception.

@ellette-giselle

The cliffhanger!!!!!

I didn’t expect Jonathan to go chasing after the boy. I thought he meant like, I have to do something… long term. Not immediately. 😂

@ellette-giselle

What in the world!?

I can’t believe you.

Well, I guess I can, but still.

*pouts*

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Chapter the 40th out!

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Chapter the 39th out!

@ellette-giselle

Ugh… poor 314.

I’m still holding on to that guess though.

@ellette-giselle

Yes! Get Jim! Lol.

Just a guess. Can’t remember if we talked about this before, but I distrust characters’ “deaths” unless I get 100% proof that they’re dead because of all the “resurrections” in books, lol.

@ellette-giselle

Lol, yes, that may be stupid of Jonathan. But it makes a good story.

I kind of feel like 314 (was that the right number) isn’t really dead. We never got much evidence besides the Agent telling us he was. He could have easily run away or something. But we shall see.

Good chapters! Jim taking care of Jonathan was hilarious.