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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
DON’T YOU DARE. *hides Evan*
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Characters:
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
I thought all of them were. I guess Jonathan would be most interesting though.
~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?
I always forget about Brian. He should…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Nice! You hyphenated firstborn though, which is one word.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon
I was gonna update you last night, but I figured I’d wait and give you all the tea in one post.
Today we did it! We went out to all the little shops, and it was awesome! Four (three of which I wanted to look at sadly) were closed, but we still got to go to three…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle Thank you!!!!
You are getting so much better at guys and girls!
I’m glad you think that! Been practicing a bit.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 11 months, 3 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
The cover looks really cool! Who designed the image? Was that you?
I wanted to add that the description on the back looked good, but the last paragraph didn’t give us much hope, if that makes sense. Most of the time in descriptions like that you’ll see something that leaves the reader guessing whether or not something is goi…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Okay… here it is… hopefully it’s at least a little accurate—I feel like I may have butchered them. If there’s anything you don’t like, let me know—I can change or redo things. 😊😅

I’m so sorry I didn’t draw the combat boots… there were too many feet and I was exhausted. Ignore the hands too—could almost go without saying at t…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle yep, pretty real to me lol
I might try it! If I can find a place to get the song.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle The way you talked about Sniper sounds like he’s in the room looking over my shoulder at what I’m typing lolllllll
Which would actually be terrifying for a few reasons. But hey, it’s not like I haven’t also insinuated that my characters actually exist and know what I think of them lol
Anyway, that song is super cool, fits Ro…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Two of my characters:
(MC guy just did something to save MC girl- his new bride- and it was super dangerous.)
girl: “ I don’t know if I want to kiss you or shove you off the bridge right now.”
Guy: “can I pick?”
I want to read that!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Huh, weird. I didn’t do that intentionally, but it might be because you don’t have an account anymore. 🤷
Thank you so much!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle I don’t know. Either way could work.
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Koshka replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Lovely! It looks like a book my brother would pick up at Mardel.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle That looks really good!!
I’m assuming the number changes for each sector.
It reminds me a little bit of the insignias my brother designs for his Icebreaker Empire universe. (He hopes to someday make a video game with a tie-in book series.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
It looks awesome! Is that for the series covers, or an illustration, or what?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
So exciting!! 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Good to have you back!
I’ll try to get to those questions later today. 😉 Sorry I haven’t yet.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle yay!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle I know right? It’s hilarious!
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