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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh, lol.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
Yeah…. Totally. *shakes head vigorously *
His backstory. First time we get to hear what happened to him.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
Augh! Really??
Rick is not a nice guy. 😠 And poor Jim!!
I love the dynamics you have going.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle awww yes!! I remember him.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator
Chapter the 38th!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
Hah! so there was a time jump!
Called it 😉
So the memories are coming back for Jonathan…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
I don’t know yet. 😂 Probably not great, but I mean at least the others are accepting him.
Okay!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
Good chapters! Nice to see Jonathan getting to see more of what the gang does. It seems like he’s becoming a full member.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle I’m just reading them now.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle I was gonna sign in to comment and not just be a guest user, but turns out this computer would probably send the comments to my mom instead of me, which is probably a bad idea lol
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator
Chapter the 37th out!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
Aw, poor Jim. I liked this section.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator
Chapter the 36th out!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @keilah-h
Two new chapters!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
Got it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
Jim giving Jonathan shoes. It was a sweet ending.
Ohh, right. But other people, maybe.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
:] Mayhaps I will post more when desire returns.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
Aww. That was sweet.
Jim seemed nicer to Jonathan before these chapters, but I guess Jonathan was hidden and Jim didn’t have to worry about the others watching.
Did the gang have something to do with Jonathan’s parents dying?
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
@loopylin @rae @koshka @ellette-giselle @theducktator
Yaay, I actually have a self-contained snippet to share. This is pre-teen Barnes, in case you’re not sure who she is.
The typewriter clicked to a stop, its keys fluttering up and down like the legs of an overturned insect. Lucille opened her eyes. The sun glared through her eyelashes, turning…
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