@ellette-giselle
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Interesting idea for Joseph. I may play around with it. However…. (carefully approaching this so as not to spoil anything…..) Joseph’s struggle isn’t doubting God as much as doubt himself. (NO! this is not a believe in your self story. *gag*) His greatest fear is that if it comes down to it, he will not be physically and spiritu…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Yeah, it was in there, about a paragraph, same time you got Noah’s backstory.
Missed that. Oops.
Is that what you think…….?
Hmmmmm
No comment.
Which technically is a comment. This is just what appeared to be in your epilogue.
Okay. Book 2. Here we go.
No you’re not crazy. Honestly, I will be asking a similar question the t…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Ok, Thanks! I don’t know if I am on the wrong forums, its more just I dont see anyone reply to anything really.
And as for the story, thank you so much! I was trying to make it sad, while using one of my most mysterious characters!
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RAE replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 weeks, 5 days ago
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Kefa replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Hey everyone I wrote a VERY VERY VERY short story about kingdom pen! enjoy!
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @raxforg
A mysterious figure walked down an empty path, “Where is everyone?” He asked himself. “I came to this kingdom to find amazing writers and poets, I heard legends of all the stories found here! So where are…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Thanks!
Thank you!! I guess I’ll have to get back to you when it’s published lol
Thanks girl! Yeah, traditional lineart beats digital all day long.
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@hybridlore oooh I love it✨✨
@keilah-h He is sad😅😭😭 but as for what happened…that’s a spoiler 🫢
@ellette-giselle TY SO MUCHHHHHH💜💜💜
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Stephie replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks, 6 days ago
This was like a treasure!!!! Oh this is so, so good! I can already see some scenes where I can add all of this stuff in/strengthen it.Â
I’m glad to hear you are finding it helpful!
Ardentan’s betraying the church……………. Someone’s quick on the draw………… tho I may have intended to save that one……….
It’s called being an author, as w…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle
Is Collins saying we should all act like Darwinist survivors tho? Just because Katniss has a traumatized survivor mentality, doesn’t mean Collins thinks it’s a good thing.
I thought the evil government was about:Desensitization – – – – dehumanizing others (the birth of the Hunger Games) – – – – now children are traumatized and…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Gotcha
 it’s all about doing whatever you must to survive. Then we have covid, and what happens? Americans make compromises with their freedom that should never have flown all in the name of survival
Yeah totally. A text, especially something that can be sloppy around the edges (like Hunger Games), can negatively affect the cu…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Thanks!! 😁
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Yeah I’m not a huge fan or critic of Hunger Games. A lot of the appeal for teens is drama/gore thrill, but to just dismiss it because the protagonist has an overwhelming survivor mind defeats the point of her character. You feel me?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @anyone-interested
New moodboard for Sara Bauer, the main character in my 2nd WIP:
She has synesthesia and is a budding writer/journalist. Her story takes place in dystopian (2090s) Denver
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
First the Boxcar Children, now Little House??? Whyyyyyyyyy must you ruin my childhood like this?😫 XD
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
Cool discussion on 50 Shades, I’ve been exploring the 2010s romance/dystopia through video essays for some time now, and that was one of them. What a freak of nature. XD I’m disappointed with Wilson’s take on Hunger Games though, just read an article on his opinion and it was very shallow. Wilson is one of those people I have…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle sure thing!!
I wouldn’t mind that. I don’t listen to podcasts much but that sounds interesting.
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 4 weeks ago
@esther-c @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @rae @ellette-giselle @anyone-else-idk-lollll
Aesthetic for Moishe Mintz✨
(a main side character for a WIP I came up with earlier this year and have recently been playing around with👀)
I gotta say he might be my fav charrie from this newer WIP
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @loopylin
Ok so I can’t share the finished cover bc y’know I’m waiting until I finish the whole thing XD but here’s the lineart for the cover of my fantasy scifi wip OLH.
It cuts off bc the drawing is huge and my scanner i tiny lol.
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MineralizedWritings posted an update 4 weeks ago
One of my emails is inkedbycorvuss@gmail.com. It’s new so hopefully I remember to check it lol!
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Wonderful! I’m sending you an email right this minute.