Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

Hey, look at that! You tagged someone! Yay!

I think you’re saying you read all the blog posts, correct? Not all the posts in the forums- because that would take an insane amount of time.

@ellette-giselle

So far, I was interested in what was happening in the book and what would happen next. Here are a few things I noticed though:

When you explained the setting and time, I think it could be done as maybe a prologue or background before the book begins (like in an “intro” or “a note to the reader” type of thing).

I noticed also th…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

This is interesting so far! I love the idea of a historical fiction set in those earlier years! I also like your whole colosseum scene.

The main things I’m looking for at the moment would be is it intriguing, have I got a good first chapter hook. Are the characters defined, are you interested in them yet. etc. Basically all the t…

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@ellette-giselle

Ok, these are just some of my initial thoughts as I was reading through it.

– I liked the action scene where the boys are watching the fighting; that drew me in. I’d say the first part of the chapter didn’t pull me in as quickly, though. Some of the dialogue felt a little bit like it was just there to fill in the story. I know…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

OK, fun fact, I have read everything on here from day one of Kingdom Pen!! (It was a lot to read but completely worth it!)

Even all that cringy writing I posted two years ago?? 🫠🫣

What does everyone do on here beside waiting to ambush new members with a slew of questions?

😂😂

post scenes and break hearts. That’s what I do. And…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

You could put however much you want to in there! If you’re doing more than a chapter at a time, it might be easier to just put a link to a document in there (if you’re okay with that), but when I did it, I just did sections at a time (I didn’t have them portioned into chapters yet, just scenes). It’s really however you want to do it.

@ellette-giselle

So wait, I could submit a book I’m working on in one of the Forums and y’all would give me feedback!

Yes! 😊😊

I am always looking for honest critiques and it’s hard to find someone that will do it because they are all afraid of hurting my feelings. Even though I tell them that it’s not hurting but helping. I think it’s just a th…

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@ellette-giselle

Aww thank you!!!

If you want to officially submit a story to KP, like I did on the website, you don’t even have to be a member or create an account to do that. So yes, you can submit one at any time!

If you want to just post a story for fun or critiques by anyone on KP, you don’t have to have a rank either…just make a new…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

So, I’m interested in this character RP thing. How would I go about joining that! I think it would be a lot of fun.

Have you looked at any of the other forum topics yet? If you find one with RP in the title, you can look at the first page to see what it’s about. It depends on the RP, but some of them people sort of jump in and d…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

haha, well, I write all of my stuff fast. The longest it ever took me to write a book was one month.

It’s the editing that takes forever.

Girl, I’m jealous…no matter how much I plan a book, it takes FOREVER to write!!! Editing is probably the easiest part for me!!

Actually, my brothers catch me doing that a lot. In fact, my c…

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@ellette-giselle

You’ll have to physically type out the tag using the @ symbol, followed by the tag name. See how I put your tag at the top of my post? It doesn’t necessarily have to be at the top of the post, but it makes it a little bit clearer who you’re talking to, especially if you’re answering a couple different people. You’ll get the hang…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

(Sorry this is late—I have a bad problem of stressing out and overthinking what I should say back… 😅)

It took me four days to write Fateful Night, but editing took several months!!

Ohh, that’s awesome!! My book has taken me over two years already and I’m nowhere near done, lol! I read your method and it sounds  quite in…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

So, now a question for y’all. What does everyone do on here beside waiting to ambush new members with a slew of questions? lol.

Lol I don’t know how familiar you are with the forums yet (I think you said you’ve been stalking KP for a little while?) but I’m just gonna explain some things as though you’re starting from ground zero a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

 The best way to ride is barefoot bareback!

YES YES YESSSSS!!!!!

Heyy! I’m Sara, though most people around here call me…well, they call me Sara. XD

Anyways, I’m a chocolate consuming, emotionally unstable, sleep deprived, algebra loving, public school attending sophomore (in highschool)! (I mean technically I’m a sophom…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Welcome to the kingdom! I’m Koshka, a writer of middle-grade stuff ranging from rustic fantasy to sci-fi, plus the occasional poem or two. I play violin and scribble somewhat decent sketches on random pieces of paper.

Oh, and I’m halfway addicted to research. Especially the archeological, cultural, and historical kinds.

Smalls…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Hi Ellette!! (you have such a beautiful name, btw 😊) Welcome to KP!!

I’m freed_and_redeemed, or more commonly called Freedom, or, since everyone knows my name now 😂, Katelyn! 💖 I’m a Christian Teen Author that writes YA Historical Fiction, (mostly WW2 😝) with my first novel set to release this Summer. I’m also a music fan, MCU…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

OK, in answer to Linus’ question, Viktor, Leonid, and Katerina were upset about the separation. However, they hardly saw their parents to begin with because of the amount they had to work just to survive. Viktor cared for his little siblings and so they took it less hard then had they been separated from each other. Natalia was g…

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@ellette-giselle

Hello and welcome!! My name is TheShadow (or Shadow for short). I play a bit of piano, draw, read, bake on the weekends, and write in my spare time. My favorite book genres are action/adventure, fantasy, and mysteries (as long as they are well written). I also have a little obsession with cats and knights lol.

Your novel sounds…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Greetings! I am The Ducktator, also known as Abigail, ruler of a vast ducktatorship. I am 15, homeschooled, and a Christian writer of fantasy, romance, and other random harder to classify WIPs. I love reading, dancing, and birding, and I am obsessed with ducks and anything duck related.

Fateful Night sounds interesting. I love…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Hello there! Welcome to Kingdom Pen!

You can call me Linus Smallprint. I am also a web developer/designer trying to get into software development. As a hobby, I am also an artist my skills are beyond pencil drawings and learning digital art and maybe watercolour as well. Since I have an account on this website, you can probably…[Read more]