Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

So, what is your opinion on the end? should I leave it unknown like it is?

I think you should show Julius accepting Jesus, and end it at that. Because I really want to know if he chose right or not! But if you like it more the way you have it then keep it!

Thank you so much for the advice you gave. I hope I was able to i…

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@ellette-giselle

what is your opinion?

I do like the ambiguity of the ending, I just wanted to make sure Julius chose right lol.

I hope that’s a good thing……..

It is good thing, it shows that your book has an impact on the reader.

Btw, thanks for sticking it out and getting to the end with me! Knowing that you were reading it really encou…

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@ellette-giselle

Ohhh so you’re an hour ahead!!!

yeahh I’m 100% A LATE NIGHT PERSON…I once stayed up until almost 11 trying to write an outline XD

What time do you get up to write?

@ellette-giselle

That’s funny XD

I can hardly ever write in the morning…

Would right after lunch work for you most days? Also, what time zone are you in? I’m in mountain time. (It’s almost 12:30 right now) That’s when I’m on break for work. (I live on a farm and work for my dad)

@ellette-giselle

Okay!!! Do you ever write in the evening? That’s when I do most of my writing XD

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, and then if I’m available we can do it together!

@ellette-giselle

If you go back to the first page, it explains everything! but basically it’s where you pick a time and write until that time as fast as you can. It keeps you accountable, focused, and you can make a lot of progress that way!

@ellette-giselle

Hey, I know you’re available to write a lot, would you want to do this together???

@ellette-giselle

Yay! I’m so excited to see how they turn out!!

@ellette-giselle

Ooh, this looks so cool! I’d love if you could do a brother and sister for me!

Name: Easton Woodbury

Age: 17

Gender: male

Clothing: long-sleeved sweater, light or dark jeans, sneakers(?)

Time period (Or the time period the fashion replicates): 90s!

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@ellette-giselle

Huh…interesting!

@ellette-giselle

well, I can say personally that I get annoyed with books that have a complex plot and also make you figure out what the world is and whats going on. I would really prefer to know more. It could be informative where you just tell the reader, or it could be something like one of the kids asking a question and an adult explaining…

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@ellette-giselle

The only thing I would say was when it said Cassian “ran, trying to outrun himself”

Actually it was “Cassian ran, trying to outrun time itself”.

That still might grate a little bit because of ran/outrun, so I changed it a little bit.

Also, from the perspective of someone who doesn’t know the full story and really is like a reade…

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@ellette-giselle

I read the last two chapters and that hit me hard too!!!

I almost cried….😭😭😭💔💔

I need to read it all the way through again!

You have a beautiful story and I can’t wait to see what God does with it!

(And I understand perfectly about why you started before Marcus converted, it makes sense now!)

@ellette-giselle

Happy 4th of July!! 😃😄

@ellette-giselle

I think I’ve decided on a character but I’m still trying to write an adequate description for you. So I should be finished at some point today or maybe tomorrow.

Your drawing of Shadow’s character looks sooo good!

@ellette-giselle

THATS THE ENDING?! Nononono it can’t be the ending right?! Julius chose to die right?! Okay that got me, that hit really hard oh my goodness. Wow.

“He shielded his wife with his own body. That lion is still trying to tare him off of her. I don’t she’s even been touched, but that beast is furious.”

Awww 🥺

Ignatius stepped a…

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@ellette-giselle

You’re welcome! I’m excited for the next chapter.

@ellette-giselle

Man… that hit hard. Really hard. I may or may not have almost started crying at the end there. Great job, I noticed you put in more descriptions of the colosseum, and that really helped to imagine the inside of the colosseum. The atmosphere was good as well, and everything was great!!

@ellette-giselle

I have to brush my sister’s hair, and then I should just about have this next chapter ready for you!

Okay, can’t wait!!