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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Whenever you have time, could you draw my boi Riker? 👀
Name: Riker Franz Schind (you can just include his first name, lol)
Age: 26-27
Gender: Male
Clothing: Black WW2 Era SS/ Totenkopverbande (Death Head Unit) 1st Lieutenant officer uniform (I can provide pics if needed)
Time period (Or the time period…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Alrighty, I’ll give a character of mine! 😄
Name: Fir Sayre
Age: Fifteen
Gender: Female
Clothing: She typically wears a stylish halter-top white tank top with something kawaii on the front, a pink hoodie wrapped around her waist, a knee length pink or pastel blue skirt, and some kind of white sneaker with white s…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
These characters sound so cool!! What’s the story about?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle I am a simple person. I see the word “sniper.” I am immediately obsessed. The last two characters I met carrying that job description stole my heart and still haven’t given it back.
so yeah, Ron is amazing already despite the fact I know nothing about him.
I know nothing of Jack either, but I already feel sorry for him. Evan…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
UPDATE TIME
@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @loopylin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol
Freedom’s Fire is sooooooo close to publishing. Just waiting on the finalized cover designs, complete with the book blurb, and then it’ll all be set…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle OH. MY. GOODNESS. 😭😭😭 TYSM!!! 💖💖💖💖 It really does mean so much!!!!!
My most recent scene was from my 2nd novel which is in the process of being written (over 57k words now tho!!), but I will say that my first novel, Freedom’s Fire, which also features Riker/Leon as the MCs, is set to hopefully publish this Summer…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Love them! Are all of these characters the ones from the story you posted the prologue and chapter about?
Also it’s really cool that you made up most of those quotes! That can be a taxing job sometimes lol 💛💛
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Omc where do you find all these quotes? I love them!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Oops I forgot to mention that I deleted the scene with her not wanting to talk to the Great One…so now it’s just the scene with her and Lilitu pretending to be animals.
I really liked it so I put it into the “scene recycling bin” if I need it again, but for now it’s not in the draft.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
“Nope, still not lost. Just temporarily misplaced the destination.”
“Left! Left! Left!…your other left!”
“Skilled enough to take it apart Patient enough to put it back together Smart enough to hide the extra parts when I’m done”
Three Krogen quotes right there! LOL Cgecko needs to see this!
Totally can see someone saying…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Love the boards!!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
😀 XD
ooo the other boards look good too! The temporarily misplaced quote is funny XD
Oh that’s ok. I was more looking for general response as a reader, not so much critical feedback as of yet. (though it’s always welcome.)
Ah, ok! 😀
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I think it’s good! Intriguing. I don’t really have any thoughts in a critical sense, and I’m not the best person to ask… but I do like it! The last part was pretty sad to read!
Ugh, I’m sorry that it took me a while to respond…😓😓
(also I love the board!)
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Esther replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Ahhh!!! They look so good!! 😍 Thank you thank you thank you!!! 🥰
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I would love to see them!!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Wait really??!!!! I want to read that!!! I love capture scenes. Especial if the badguys are really mean and the hero still doesn’t lose his head. all though, from what I’ve seen of Nahim………
He does pretty well in the beginning, but then Vorgan uses Nahim’s greatest fear to break him. It’s the darkest hour in my book, and I haven’t…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009
Writing sprints are really fun! So are crawls… which is something similar, but it’s longer and more involved. I’ve been doing some of those over at the King’s Daughters’ Writing Camp. (Which y’all should check out! It’s awesome!!)
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 2 years, 2 months ago
Thank you! Yeah, after the help I got with this, I feel like I could try anything on here and I would have help no matter where I got stuck, because so many of Y’all are on here!
Yeah, everyone on here is really helpful.
OK, there you go. That would be the end. Let me know if you like it better then the first one.
I loved it!!! T…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
woah….
It definitely does sound interesting.
I feel like them talking out all of their plans for a whole chapter/prologue isn’t the most… eye catching… at least in my opinion…
But then again, I feel like this could set up for the following chapter pretty well—especially if the next one jumps right in a bit.
I also agree with…[Read more]
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