Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

Sorry for the late reply, had another busy weekend. I think option #7 is the best for your covers.

@theducktator

Banana #8

@grcr @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @rae @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @smiley @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD

I made a couple new aesthetics for Leon and Riker🥰

(and I absolutely adore Pinterest and Canva now y’all😂😂 so helpful)

Andddddd y’all get to help me decide which character to make an aesthetic…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I try to overlook mistakes and I’ve gotten a lot better, believe it or not! But I still can’t stand looking at my draft and seeing so much cringy writing!
Even when I build something out of wood…I still want the wood to look perfect lol

I’m just a perfectionist I guess *shrugs*

Great!!!!!!

@ellette-giselle

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Gah… that’s not how it ends… right? RIGHT?! 😶😶

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I like how you wrote this part:

For some reason, though he knew what was going to happen, the whole situation didn’t seem real. In fact, after the initial horrified shock, Jonathan no longer felt the stabbing fear. He was numb physically and mentally. The more he t…

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@ellette-giselle

This is really good! I still don’t understand how you can write so fast…

Like I get that you have it all planned out…I have mine planned out too, exactly what I want to happen, but I still can’t write it that fast, I’m too much of a perfectionist and want everything to be exactly how I want XD

The only critique was that…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thanks girl <3

@ellette-giselle

Thanks!

I’m just trying to be super careful that I’m still honoring God with my writing. And I’m also paranoid about my writing XD

@ellette-giselle

Haha you’re good!

But question–  do you think it’s too dark?

Huh I don’t know if you tagged me or not, I’ll look at it sometime today!!! 👍👍

@ellette-giselle

Ok, the last section on the first page was good, but when Aaron is telling Turin about how sin entered the world and when Christ lived for us, I think someone learning about it would ask one or two more questions to understand it better. Other than that, it was good. I have to go help my brother now with something, so I will read…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sorry, I have been slacking with giving feedback lately. Summer is really getting ahead of me lol. I will try to give you feedback today after I read over the sections you posted.

@ellette-giselle

What was he thinking? Hmm, maybe he WASN’T thinking. He often tries to do what’s right……. but sometimes he would do with a good long moment of thought process.

*sighs*

Now, because he didn’t think, he’s gonna die. So cold, so sad, bye-bye now. (Moral of the story; always think before you act kids)

lol 😂😂

Anyone want to read what h…

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@ellette-giselle

Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen!

I know this is an exceptionally late ambush, but when you asked what we did on here other than ambush newbies, I realized this is one thing I haven’t done in a while. And as you love Peter Pevensie (from the BOOKS), and Smalden, draw beautifully, and like skirts, I feel an unavoidable obligation to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I think the last one is my fave!

Also, I read the blurb that you have and I like it! I usually prefer non-dialogue blurbs myself, but that one is still fine I think, but I would be happy to help regardless! All I’d really need I think is a basic rundown of the plot and what you want your readers to immediately grasp from the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Do you have any other thoughts on the chapters you’ve read?

@ellette-giselle

I like number 7 best I think. The title feels like it is part of the picture.

Jonathan, you reckless, courageous, foolish kid. What did you think you were doing? (I think you’d get a long just fine with Vulkasin to the rest of the world’s danger)

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 I have a Chase scene for you

@whalekeeper @loopylin @grcr @theducktator @esther-c @kielah-h @theshadow @ellette-giselle @anyone

I have a really sweet but sad Chase scene. For context, this is after Chase’s last battle with Narsa Jeptune.

oh, and beware, I’ve barely edited this. Criticism welcome 🙂

Chase…

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@ellette-giselle

*exhales*

I just read that scene you shared. Literally, Jonathan has me so stressed right now!! That was so intense! What was he thinking!!?? DUDE! 😑

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Okay… now… ahem. 😅

I, too, like the 7th cover. My second favorite is 4, though…

@ellette-giselle @rae @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings

I was going to introduce my new character today, but I procrastinated too much on making a description you all could follow lol

is it ok if I wait till Monday to do it? I have something on Sunday I have to do and won’t be able to post a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle lol I think I remember seeing that somewhere.

@ellette-giselle

If you want to share your plot outline and story details, I could try to help you with a blurb!