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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
yes I think so
I KNOW so
Aaron I’m warning you…don’t make me say I told you so…I care about you too much to let you do this…
Lowkey stressing over here
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Okay what he does is evil and has no excuse. But also his story is so sad…HE HAS A TRAGIC BACKSTORY
trust me you will change your mind
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Sometimes the villains are the best characters though….
Yes he is evil but even the evil bad guys need love and a second chance 😭😭💔💔
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Thanks! <3
NOOOOO I CAN’T BELIEVE I DID THAT wHyYy?!?!
I’ll change it to “mani”.
Sef is 12, Lilitu is 13, Cassian is 18, Eloy’s 15.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
BUT WHY DO YOU HATE HANS
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Tags: @ellette-giselle @jonas @grcr (CASSIAN SCENE ALERT)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
girl you have no idea…
I’m calling in backup.
@RAE HELP ME THEY ARE ATTACKING OUR POOR HANS 😭😭😭😭
I’m choosing to ignore that offensive statement 😢😢😔
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Aaaaaaand I hate Hans already.
Not only can you not say that when Rae’s around….
You can’t say that when I’m around…
HANS IS LITERALLY MY POOR BABYYYYY AND I LOVE HIMMMM NO MATTER THAT HE’S THE VILLAIN
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I’ve never seen that before. Sometimes KP eats posts but I’ve never seen it take the user to a weird page. I dunno 🤷♀️
If it keeps happening I’d recommend you copy and paste your post before submitting it in case it’s eaten.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
That has never happened to me…
but KP eats my posts all the time, I just don’t have that thingy pop up XD
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 honestly, the only thing about your story that I found iffy for me was the whole Rath-doing-what-he-did-to-Sef’s-mom thing, and I already stated that that’s ok to leave in there if you warn people what they’re getting into before they start the book. Like @ellette-giselle said, Wingfeather and Green Ember have had their…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint yep! I’m learning Blender! I have a YouTube channel called Slate Dragon Productions where I hope to someday post my animations. (I have one video as of this writing. A spinning cube that could easily be someone’s screensaver. LOL.)
@ellette-giselle @rae @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @mineralizedwritings
finally!…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
The newest section was really good!! I don’t have any critiques for it, I like Aaron’s character a lot so far, and the point about God making the seed grow. I also liked how Aaron was afraid but trusted God, it felt realistic. Nice job!
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Ok, though I agree with Sara that the paragraphs are a little long.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Thank you so much!!! She looks amazing!!!
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
And this one is mostly for myself and @rae
@koshka @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @ellette-giselle @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol
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Hans’ aesthetic🖤

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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
That image does clear it up, thank you!
Some feedback for you.
I do like how it takes time for the Gospel to get through to Turin. I know that feeling of trying to tell someone about it, thinking I would be able to convince them, but to no avail. Sometimes it is a little easy to forget that it is God who softens peoples hearts…[Read more]
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