@ellette-giselle
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle lol I can see why
my dad was never the handy type. My grandpa is though, and whenever he comes to watch the house while we’re away on a trip, he often does little fixes around the house.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle LOL the tool meme
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
WAY BETTER!
Good!
Ok, the magic thing is a little fuzzy still.
That’s because I forgot about that one. Oops. Thanks for the suggestion though, I think I have a good idea on how to fix this.
Ooo, I like the Charles song!! – Ellette
OOH I LOVE THAT SONG. – Keliah
Ocarina of time does have a good soundtrack. Just fo…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Sorry, the pencil has not inspired me. Just run with the status quo.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle ikr? I was kinda surprised when that was the song that came up when I clicked the link but I’m not complaining haha
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I updated Chapter the 13th with your suggestions. Would you mind taking a look at it again please and see if this is working better? (The only parts I changed were from right after the description of Charles to when he begins to tell his story, so don’t worry about the rest of the chapter.)
Also, on a side note, I still have not…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
If I’m going to be blunt here, reading it I felt like you as the author felt an obligation to let me know that I am still aloud to read fantasy books, so you through that in and then moved on.
Honestly, that was the obligation I felt writing this, so no wonder you picked that up from reading it.
So yeah, I would 100% recommend m…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Oh, yeah, I’m gonna sit out again 😑 sorry, everyone, that I’ve kinda just not been participating. I don’t have any good excuses :p
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
So, as I said, I’m just debating the opposite side from you, so I most likely do not believe what I’m saying. In fact, I’m personally more inclined to agree with your side.
Oh, also, I’m gonna ask someone to stop us if we get too heated. I have a tendency to do this when I really get the ball rolling. @ellette-giselle If Whaley…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
It’s very good, but the whole reading fantasy seemed like you started to go into it and then pulled back and skirt5ed the whole problem. I feel like if it’s going to be there at all it needs more. At the moment it feels kinda like “Why?” If you have nothing more to say on the matter, I would consider cutting it.
Hmm. I didn’t…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Here is my take on Prince Fried Rich. I was going to give him light brown pants, but I did not have a good pencil crayon for that, so I switched to black. Anyway, I think he needs some pointy ears and a ridiculous amount of equipment on his back, eh?
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle Just a friendly reminder that a book can glorify God without explicitly stating Him. :3
I used to believe the same thing, and it’s totally ok if that’s your personal conviction and I’m not here to argue, but as I’ve grown and met other Christian authors who don’t necessarily mention God but still show aspects of Christianity,…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Ok, That’s alright. You know I’ll always give you my honest opinion and we can’t possibly agree on everything. Thanks for being kind about it.💗
Of course! By the way, I didn’t mean to sound like I disagree with anything you said. When I said you touched nerves, I meant those thoughts felt very applicable to second-hand pain…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Umm… I clicked submit, but…uhh… my post disappeared. I’m reposting, so sorry if you get this twice…
ahhhh…. sorry i’m responding late-ish…. my days have become sooo busy lol 😅😑
I did draw him… today… just now…
So… here is my picture of Friedrich…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle you could if you want, I know several people have that kinda thing already but it’s fun to see everyone’s interpretations of each other’s characters. It’s why this art challenge thing is so fun.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle that’s awesome! And I’m totally good with art of mine too lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle you are welcome! Thank you for letting me draw your character!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@theducktator @loopylin @stephie @theshadow @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Longest chapter yet. Finally, we are starting to get into some Christian themes (turn your heresy radar on). I will try to get Chapter the 15th – The Saviour to you later this week.
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Aw, Root is cute.
Mixed feelings. On one hand, it’s not too bad, on the other, who would name their kid after the thing that a carrot or potato is!?
You could shorten it to Moko? I think that’s a surname. That’s probably too different.
I looked it up. It appears it has both feminine and masculine meanings, but I don’t like the mas…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle finished with my drawing!
I wasn’t in the mood for drawing his whole arms/body, I wanted to focus more on the face. I think I made him look a little too young, especially considering he’s wearing the garb of a king rather than a prince, but that’s also just my art style. I enjoyed thinking up designs for the crown and tunic…[Read more] - Load More