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Sara replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 19 hours ago
Okay!!! Do you ever write in the evening? That’s when I do most of my writing XD
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Sara replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 19 hours ago
Yeah, and then if I’m available we can do it together!
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Sara replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 20 hours ago
If you go back to the first page, it explains everything! but basically it’s where you pick a time and write until that time as fast as you can. It keeps you accountable, focused, and you can make a lot of progress that way!
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Sara replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 20 hours ago
Hey, I know you’re available to write a lot, would you want to do this together???
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Esther replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 day, 20 hours ago
Yay! I’m so excited to see how they turn out!!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 day, 21 hours ago
Ooh, this looks so cool! I’d love if you could do a brother and sister for me!
Name: Easton Woodbury
Age: 17
Gender: male
Clothing: long-sleeved sweater, light or dark jeans, sneakers(?)
Time period (Or the time period the fashion replicates): 90s!
Physical appearance: 6’ 0’’; light skin; gray eyes; dirty blonde/light…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 21 hours ago
Huh…interesting!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 21 hours ago
well, I can say personally that I get annoyed with books that have a complex plot and also make you figure out what the world is and whats going on. I would really prefer to know more. It could be informative where you just tell the reader, or it could be something like one of the kids asking a question and an adult explaining…
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 22 hours ago
The only thing I would say was when it said Cassian “ran, trying to outrun himself”
Actually it was “Cassian ran, trying to outrun time itself”.
That still might grate a little bit because of ran/outrun, so I changed it a little bit.
Also, from the perspective of someone who doesn’t know the full story and really is like a reade…
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 1 day, 22 hours ago
I read the last two chapters and that hit me hard too!!!
I almost cried….😭😭😭💔💔
I need to read it all the way through again!
You have a beautiful story and I can’t wait to see what God does with it!
(And I understand perfectly about why you started before Marcus converted, it makes sense now!)
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 days ago
I think I’ve decided on a character but I’m still trying to write an adequate description for you. So I should be finished at some point today or maybe tomorrow.
Your drawing of Shadow’s character looks sooo good!
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 2 days, 19 hours ago
THATS THE ENDING?! Nononono it can’t be the ending right?! Julius chose to die right?! Okay that got me, that hit really hard oh my goodness. Wow.
“He shielded his wife with his own body. That lion is still trying to tare him off of her. I don’t she’s even been touched, but that beast is furious.”
Awww 🥺
Ignatius stepped a…
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 2 days, 20 hours ago
You’re welcome! I’m excited for the next chapter.
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 2 days, 20 hours ago
Man… that hit hard. Really hard. I may or may not have almost started crying at the end there. Great job, I noticed you put in more descriptions of the colosseum, and that really helped to imagine the inside of the colosseum. The atmosphere was good as well, and everything was great!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 2 days, 22 hours ago
I have to brush my sister’s hair, and then I should just about have this next chapter ready for you!
Okay, can’t wait!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 2 days, 22 hours ago
Do you think Julius is going to believe?
Hmm, I’m not sure. The way he’s acting, trying only to preserve himself, it doesn’t seem like he will. Or maybe when he’s see Marcus and Flavia die (if they do) then he’ll come to faith. Sigh, it’s another game of will-he-won’t-he XD
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 days, 22 hours ago
I LOVE IT!!!! Thank you so much, it’s so good! I like it in black and white, and also I haven’t figured out his surcoat yet lol. Thanks again, I really appreciate it!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 2 days, 22 hours ago
Chapter 13 and 14 are really smooth, the scenes were good and atmospheric. The only thing I noticed which isn’t even a big issue is that you used Caesar’s name instead of Nero’s in chapter 13 at some point. It was great though!! Once again, Julius’ inner conflict was portrayed well.
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days ago
I’d join too…except I don’t write enough to have a competition XDD
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