Ellette Giselle

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I think murderer could work as long as he said Like murderer, or almost was a murderer. If you want him to say something that he is, he could think of himself as a monster or wild beast. Or, since he is trying to be the hero, an interesting flip would be to have him decide, “I’m not the hero, I’m the villain.” That would flow wi…

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Oh my. No, I’ve never seen that.

I stole the idea from my brother, who has also never seen that.

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XD

The one about reading as a reader and then reading as a writer is so relatable!

You can ask @raxforge , but I have a habit of criticizing every book I read for school from a writer’s perspective. My tutor is still trying to convince me that Robinson Crusoe isn’t really as bad as I said. Good luck convincing a part German to…[Read more]

@keilah-h

also, I’m not sure if you’re referring to Alan or Rour, but I think neither of them went too far. They both are wrong about something and think they’re right, and as such it’s messing with their minds.

I was referring to Alan attempting to kill Rour.

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WHAT! He didn’t go save Martha!!!!

Alan! Grrrrrr!

Alan’s beginning…[Read more]

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The chefs would have no idea what to do with a real chicken.

By ‘chefs’ you mean teenagers who can barely put processed food in the microwave, right?

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That’ s because they don’t cook real chicken there.

LOLLL!!! I would like to argue against that but I have this feeling that you are right.

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THE ONE WITH THORIN AND KILI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

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Leo

“I know.” Footsteps in the distance clicked faintly in his ears. A buzzing radio signal flared nearby. The security team no doubt. Leo looked at Rory, eyes narrowing. “You ever climbed a brick wall?”

He took the Kid’s wide eyes as an answer. Leo leaning against a classroom door as he fished around for the master key. Two…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, I like it!! I could definitely feel and experience what Jonathan was feeling and going through.

The only suggestion I would have would be to eliminate some of the passive voice (“The floor was sinking…” “…his brother was on his hands and knees…”). It will tighten up the prose and draw the reader in more.

But that’…[Read more]

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Who’s ready for the next scene?

Chapter the 22nd – The Murderer

I need to read Little House on the Prairie again.

The is one character in this chapter that I’m wondering if I’ve gone too far with him. Does it make sense why he does what he does in this chapter? (This…[Read more]

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I’m holding on to hope that Eric will realize how serious what he did was and come to a true repentance. Though it almost seems to me, (especially after he did that) that he wasn’t ever a true believer but the Saviour was more of almost a”lucky charm” to him. Something to bring him happiness and keep him safe.

Time will tell for this.

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Loved that snippet! I like how the reader is just as confused as Jonathan, I kinda felt like I was reading an anime lol.

@ellette-giselle lolllll I think I saw that meme somewhere before

@ellette-giselle ohhh ok.

She looks great in that pose!

@ellette-giselle ehhhh I have weird conversations here too.

Do you think Linus Smallprint has forgiven us for taking over his chat to discuss the finer points of being obsessed with a character?

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Ugh, now I’m having traumatic flashbacks to 2020. 😬😂

@ellette-giselle Emily’s cool. Who or what is she protecting with that gun?

@ellette-giselle lol that last one

I have a charrie who would be the same. “Wear a mask” people say, and then he shows up wearing like a ski mask kind of a thing, and everyone freaks out for an entirely different reason.

@power whaaaaa? lolllll

@ellette-giselle green ember quotes!!

ngl I love the writing in that series. It’s the perfect balance of serious and funny sometimes.

@the_lost-journal @ellette-giselle pffft that was a weird conversation lol