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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Lol, good luck. Are you judging them by the end of today or tomorrow?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Now if only Joseph remembers this……
I guess we will find out.
Yeah. That’s because it’s so much easier to write about people closer to your own age.
I know. And even when there are characters who are older, it is much easier to leave them at home when all the young people go out on an adventure. I’m trying to work on an older c…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
March 12th
A nice peek into Aaron’s past.
Goodbye to Eric, Asher, Sabina, Darian and Alicia. Until next time.
“Stop right there,” the other guard barked. He looked over his shoulder and then drew near. “Hand over the bag so we can search it.”
Joseph nearly froze. Just beneath the cloak at the top of his bag was his Bible,…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Here’s my story, sorry if it isn’t great, I kind of rushed it lol.
The Final Minutes of a Dying Man
Eyes closed, he began to think.
And now, to death I go. The pain had subsided now, he couldn’t feel it much.
And as for life, what I have i to say? I laughed, cried, feared, failed, conquered, and loved. I saw many things, such…[Read more] -
Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle wow!
also don’t worry about your signature being messy. That’s just how signatures are.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Yw!
It looks a little ‘messy’ in the way most signatures do, but it’s not ‘sloppy’ and it’s nice and even.
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I just gave you access. However, I’m going to paste my whole story here. I will be pretty busy today cooking for Thanksgiving, so I won’t be able to give everyone access that quickly. So, I’ll post it here where it’s easy to read!
Life from Death“Truly, truly, I say to you, the one who hears My word, and b…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Thanks!
Oh wow, that looks really nice! I love the wreath of branches.
(your signature [on the drawing, not your forum signature] looks very pretty and neat, btw. I wish I could do mine that nice :p)
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I figured you probably knew, but just wanted go make sure. Because otherwise I would start rambling about stuff without defining things, like I normally do. XD
Yeah, I either lump it into personality or give it a category
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
That’s true, the rewrite was.
The one paragraph where you said something along the lines of, make the enemy rejoice when you’re out of the fight, seemed taken straight from that quote (C.S. Lewis?) I could see modern believers saying something like that, but I don’t think it would be a well-known phrase in this world. Maybe p…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Yay!!! A happy part this time!! 🥲
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay! Here’s my story! I hope it fits under the prompt!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KRKHdtUymxACwVnKGswOJq6yXCThk_mA4qnmq0SLmYo/edit?tab=t.0
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Not exactly sure what you mean by that……..
Psychology is the study of the human mind and its functions, especially those affecting behavior in a given context. (I just pulled that off Oxford Languages. XD)
I like to add psychological stuff to my character charts. It can tell me why the character wants what he wants.
For exa…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I have not. Thanks for reminding me about it, lol.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
“Geed,” Joseph replied. “How are Asher and Eric?”
Good?
Joseph lifted his head and looked at Sabina. “Thank you for telling me.”
Now the question is, how well is Joseph going to remember this conversation?
Looks good!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Nope! You just told me I could only put a few of them in my signature, plus the 100 character limit, and that was when I was trying to convince you to save Eric. I can try to fit them all in, or I’ll just write “all of Ellette’s charries” if that’s what you prefer. 🤗😉
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle Looks good!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Thank ye!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Please be honest as y’all read this, because saving the boys is going to be a HUGE change. However, I think it may be the right one, and some interesting things happened that makes me think so. However, I am still on the edge, and I want to know in your honest opinion which direction seems best to take. (of course we all love A…
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
I was wondering if that was the inspiration. Rhoda is one of my favorite Bible characters. XD
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