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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle ty for letting me know😅😆 AND AGASGSDJASVLKDBJACDHSBK GIRLLLLLL YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I HAD TO HOLD BACK A SQUEAL WHEN I READ ABOUT YOUR WW2 WIP!!!!! sbavdsadjobvkjidsdn AHHHHHHHHHHHH
@koshka flash fiction is hard but such great practice, yes😌
HOW. DARE. YOU.
I HAD NO INVOLVEMENT IN THIS…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
It’s a very good book, but a difficult story. I would recommend it.
😂 It’s not even published yet!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Looks good. This will definitely help it not to feel too fast.
At that moment, the door crashed open. Ezra jumped, and Joseph started to his feet, gripping the arm of his chair so tightly his hands went white.
“Hello father! I didn’t expect you home so soon!” Quin exclaimed as he bounded into the room.
Didn’t your mother teach…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
*Splutter* Texans weren’t made for this much snow!
Three more steps. Calion stood gazing over the edge into the chasm below. A river threaded it’s way down there, cutting a blue seam through a rolling green wood. A mile, two, down. A misty cloud rolled by, blocking the view and pulling his gaze back to the jagged edge just a…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
That sounds like more work than it’s worth.
Also, I think you can just backspace and retype the last letter of the tag.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@jonas @loopylin @ellette-giselle @anyoneintherescuegroup
I’ll probably introduce another character when you guys rescue Loopy’s character. Mine isn’t necessarily locked up but will notice the commotion and help when you guys need a quick getaway.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @loopylin @hybridlore @grcr @ellette-giselle
Rogun — Elderstrand (Group 1)
Taken aback, Rogun had to bite back an angry retort.
“If we stay here, we will die,” he said. “The Scrabblers will be here in minutes. If you want me to prove that you can trust me, I can’t, but I am bound by my honor to bring you out of this pl…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Do you mean the snippets from Crimson Rose? I really like them!!! So, I’ve heard a snippet of Josef and Reuven…perhaps one about the doctor, too? Wait, is he a doctor?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @loopylin @hybridlore @grcr @ellette-giselle
(I’m not normally going to use NPC POVs very much, but right now, this is more convenient than using Ellis.)
Rogun — Elderstrand (Group 1)
Rogun stopped and turned around as he realized no one was following. Mildly annoyed that the newcomers didn’t seem to grasp the urgency of…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
She’s so cute! Is she blind?
Thanks for telling me about the photos! I’m actually writing a WW2 story currently. Well, I haven’t started writing it yet. It’s a journal of an evacuee during the Blitz. A friend of mine actually asked if I wanted to write this because she was doing it for a school project. We thought it would be…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I knew it was his wedding from the previous post. Just saying. lol.
Good perception!
Oh you nasty person.
Hey, you always write wonderful words. So, consider my snowballs as a compliment: I enjoy your writing.
“It’s still me,” Josef said, softly.
Aww! It’s so sweet! Fits perfectly with the soothing Shire music I’m listening to.
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
YES! Liberty you got it!!! It is the rose!!!
YAY!!!!!
No prob. If the animal characters inspire you, then that’s what matters.
Awesome!
I colorized a lot of black and white photos from ww2, and then found a few more here and there.
Wow. So, did you just look for ww2 photos on the web? What did you use to colorize them?
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I just got an amazing idea for a story!!!! Because of certain things, I won’t be sharing the story’s title until it’s finished, as it will give some things away ahead of time!
Dale Sommers walked down the street, hands in his pockets and whistling a tune. The crisp winter air playful nipped at his nose and swirled through his dark…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Yes, I would greatly appreciate help placing Jenny. Sorry for replying so late, my notifications aren’t working properly rn.
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @raxforge @loopylin @hybridlore @grcr
Baron (Brutus)—with Group 1
Kid in trouble. Brutus looked at the one who had spoken, seeing a girl who had white hair like he did. She didn’t…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Can I bring the Agents back?
Please!
🙂
Considering who you tagged, are you planning to break up Sef and Chase’s reunion? Cuz if Chase has to fight the Agents too, he would probably die, and at very least be asleep for days. He’s used his power a lot the past day.
I think I’d like to go with the aunt…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
liberty!!! I’ve been waiting all morning for your email. I love to talk people silly with this sort of thing, and no one else really likes to listen. lol.
That’s great! I’m so glad you love talking to people silly about this, and I for one love reading your words!
Okay, the word count is…….
Fateful Night–> 90,923
The Choices…
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
WAIT!!!!!! I think I got it!!! I just came to me! It’s the ROSE. Right? It even ties with the title!
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
anyone catching a theme here?!?!
There’s something that is going to link all my adult characters……
Um…faith over fear? Is that the theme?
Oh! You have to post them when you do! I have found making boards is very helpful for character development, and they are a great thing to look at when you need to feel inspired.
Okay! Thank…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
A continuation of my previous snowball writing :
“You ready, Buddy?”
A sigh escaped Buddy’s lips before he could stop it.
A chuckle sounded from behind him.
“To tell the truth, Butch, I’m as nervous as a…” he searched for an applicable metaphor. “As a wave that’s tossed to and fro.”
Butch came to stand next to him…
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh popycock. For one thing I actually quite liked your story. For another, style isn’t that big of a deal. It’s mostly a challenge to make every word count.
But I understand if you don’t join. Some writers don’t enjoy that challenge as much as others, or whatever. *Shrug* XD
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