Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

In this chapter, you did a better job of showing Leon and Julian are in a place they used to call home. And I’m not just referring to their comments upon seeing the village in the valley. Their interactions with the Klein family, falling right into the traditions, showed this even better than their words.

I like the feel of the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I think it’s fine. They have to, in this instance, instead of just jumping at it when they don’t need to. Since Elishavet was the one who pointed that out, I would wait to see what she thinks, but I think that it’s fine.

@ellette-giselle

Yes?

@ellette-giselle

What section? Kingdom Pen, why didn’t you tell me about this? *Goes back to read*

@rae @ellette-giselle

@ellette-giselle

Okaaaaay, after I give them some decent shading. But only then. *Glares at your blackmail and poofs away*

@ellette-giselle

It’s very funny…. but as I work through my WWII set, I’ve just had an amazing idea for a fantasy. I wonder it WWII triggers fantasy ideas…….. lolololol.

*Meanwhile I sit here with a WWII era inspired fantasy, watching you talk* 😁

@ellette-giselle

*Reconsiders*

NO. NO, I’LL NEVER GIVE IN! I’M TOO INSECURE , YOU CAN’T MAKE ME! *Struggles against my bonds*

@ellette-giselle

EEEEEEEE Thank youuu! It’s quite funny to me that it’s what it reminded you of because three of them are actually training to be warriors lolol. Maybe I’ll run with that…

Oh, looks like Whaley agrees with me!! XD

Lolol 😄

I guess I’ll have to just start one something then…

*quite excited and motivated to draw a comic*

@ellette-giselle

XD

Leo

He bit back a grin. “Like they always say, it’s not save to jump out of a moving vehicle.”

The lorry door whooshed open. Silvia led the group aboard, waving their bus card under a the scanner. Leo helped Rory up the steps as inconspicuously as possible. The lorry was mostly empty this early in the morning. Their few…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Silvia

Spangled darkness in a thousand colors. Gleaming nebula. White dwarfs.

Silvia blinked away the swirling images. Another time maybe. She’d fly again. She shrugged.

“Just wondering. Not many people around here have.”

She turned her head, catching the distant rattling of the bus coming up the street. A sigh brushed past…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thanks!! I’m so so glad you like it!! 😊  I have been praying over it for a while, that God would help me have the right words and ideas. Thank you so much for your encouragement!

@ellette-giselle

Leo

Listening to Rory’s pain filled breathing made Leo’s own throat ache. He shifted to take more of the kid’s weight.

Then they were on the pavement outside the apartment complex. Another five halting steps deposited them on the bench at the bus stop. Leo let out a gust of air.

“Sorry kid. You probably shouldn’t be out of bed…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

You’re fine. You’re still in charge of your character, but I get it. =)

Leo

He stacked their empty plates and carried them to the sink. They’d do the washing up later.

“Quincy, you got your backpack?”

The boy nodded and grinned, swinging his feet under his chair. Bare feet. Silvia her out a half exasperated laugh. “Monkey,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thanks for the suggestions. I think I’m likely to include all of those eventually.

@ellette-giselle @raxforge @whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @keilah-h

Thank you all of you.

For those of you who have read my draft, do you have any requests for my next illustration? I’m thinking of either a fight scene or Alan in prison.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah… 🤣🤣😶

@ellette-giselle

You’re right, you’re right, but that was a better comparison than the Cadwicks. Plus, Sabina and Turin became nicer xD