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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Book 3 time!
So it’s Leon and Julian then. (Unless you suddenly decide you want to switch to Quin for the next chapter.)
(I wonder how much of the book you can guess by looking at the aesthetic!!)
War? War. Boat! Wolves! Snow. Orphans…
Never to return.
Ominus…
But yeah, just thought I’d give everyone a “trigger war…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Is there supposed to be something special about Julian’s eyes? He gets 2Â close-ups of his blue irises…they’re blue, right?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Feels like a battle vibe, but oh well. The Empire does do a lot of fighting, right? But Leon and Julian themselves wouldn’t really be a part of it probably.
I decide lots of things about people I don’t know because me mind likes to have a face to go with a name, and when I don’t have one, I view what I know as the building block…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
There’s also a lot of archery.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Oh oh. Who is that shadowy masked fellow? The villain of the story?
Oh yes…I didn’t read your other two books…so I don’t have anything to say except…you killed a character. So sad. And yet, glad.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I was just planning to get to that! So…you have ship in it??!!! Cool! Maybe a Paul scene? (These are my random thoughts…)
Uh oh…I see an arena…don’t tell me they get thrown into that…and wolves…*gulp* hopefully, they’re nice wolves?? I always love nice wolf characters…I see a lot of young children…oh, someone…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Hah, you always say that whenever I guess at what’s going to happen. But you do try to throw me off a lot, so I’m just not going to listen. 😅
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Yes…I got that feel after a while. (that you were only sparring)
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
oh it was super tough. I decided that you had brown hair, a friendly, cheerful, slightly more outgoing personality. Loved animals, lived in the country, and liked western/countryish style clothing.
You’re actually correct on all those things except the brown hair! Good deductions!
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Haha. I was more riled up about the insult to my brothers, not to me. haha!
I kind of thought so.
And I believe the Scottish jab was a playful one. *shrug* I have no hard feelings towards him, and he has none towards me.
I was still really new to KP…so I wasn’t sure at that time…I was thinking, “Woah…that was intense.”😂
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I really like it!! I’m seeing a lot of battle, soldiers, and little girls… hmm… 🤔
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
I think it was, because I was trying to guess what you were like based on your profile pic.
Really? So, what did you think about me and how I was like?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Well, he was talking about gross things brothers do to their sisters…and you were like, “N-O. My brothers do not do that. They’re trained to be gentlemen.”
I thought a real fight was going on (Power insulted your Scottish heritage) until some amends were made between you two. *whew* It was greatly relieving.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
That’s fair. Lol
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Wow, you really do sound like Power. 😅
Good, I can’t wait to get to know them better since right now their personalities kind of blend together.
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
He looks so cool!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Okay, I mostly like Julian to be honest. I don’t know much about Leon yet, but I’ll probably grow to like him too.
There wasn’t going to be a third and fourth book in the first place. There wasn’t going to be a second one for that matter. But they wouldn’t shut up and let me move on. I believe that God wanted to say some more…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
That was you? I can’t remember if you were the one who helped me…it may have been that though.
Where I first remember meeting you more was during the Short Story Contest War. I was like, “I like this girl!” Scottish…your firey debate with Power…your writings…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Oh no… oh no… Ellette, what are you going to do to them?? My poor Leon and Julian!! 😢
And we totally called that they were going to be the next leads.😉I love the title and the verse at the beginning too. I’m excited to see what happens next… 😬
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