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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
Leo
Dear God. Help me. He knows so little, and I have no clue what to say. He stared at the back of the boy’s head, trying to find the right words.
“No, Rory. He rescues us from Hell. From death and torment forever. The government hasn’t and won’t be around forever. So Rory,” He settled a hand on the boy’s shoulder, brushed the…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
Thank you for snowballing me and sorry if I missed one of you! (And sorry it took so long for me to reply 😭😭) Finally getting around to this… lol. @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @whalekeeper
Little bit more than 500 words but I had to finish the scene : )
Oh, and you probably know Liz as Liv (The scientist from my wip OLH) I had to…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @&c.
Welp. It was actually rather difficult, but it came together quickly in the end.
*bows*
This is Aiche, one of the king’s shepherds. He’s got a lot on his mind, but there’s hope yet. There’s always hope.
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
@calyhuge x3 💨⚪️ @ellette-giselle x4 💨⚪️ @rae x2 💨⚪️
hehehe
@whalekeeper you can throw the other five
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
Leo
He paused mid step and looked back at the kid.
Quincy had looped an arm around Rory’s neck, and was reaching out dusty fingers for the glass. He giggled. “Roror, it’s God’s house.”
Roror? Leo smiled, feeling all the tension from the last few hours drain from his shoulders. And not just him; Silvia sank down on a pew…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
Where are we in terms of distance from the school? Are you guys intending to disappear or…? XD
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 5 days ago
Ah. Such fun. I love the kid’s reactions. XD
Leon laughed, a knowing expression on his face.
So…what is a knowing expression? Raised eyebrows? A smirk? This is such a vague description that his face won’t settle into one expression. It’s just a blur.
This is random, but I’ve noticed that your characters pray in turns. Is…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 5 days ago
Here’s an aesthetic for Project Golden Songs, my new WIP. (It’s the one with the shepherd Aiche) (boy don’t I have a thing for shepherds. XD) I’m not dumping my other two, just trying to get this written.
Meet Elline, daughter of kings. She’s had a rough time of it, but she’s made of sterner stuff than most think.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
*Cackles* *Grins*
I love it. Quincy seems good at activating ProtectMode in people. I need to tie that into the book.
Alrighty then.
Leo
The row of hedges ended in another lane. Leo turned up it for a few feet before darting around a large glass greenhouse with a gasped out prayer. He sent a glance over his shoulder.
Rory…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Lol, the last part. 😆
I think the scene felt a little awkward just because we haven’t seen much of Amelia and what she feels about Joseph, but I think you’re working on adding in more of that. Otherwise, good job.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Leon nodded. “I am tired of it. You know, there’s not much more I could wish for then a home of my own. A place to settle and say, ‘this home is mine, this house is mine, these fields are mine, this family is mine.’” Leon paused, and when he spoke again his voice had dropped to a lower, almost sad tone. “With the way things are…
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Gotcha. We’re either going to an apartment flat, or their ship the Mantis, you pick.
Silvia
Number sequences flashed across her tablet. She stifled a groan. They had a tail.
A drop of sheer terror made her dizzy with the images, the sounds parading through her head. Pounding feet. Sharp metal. Blood.
She sucked in a deep…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Yes, I had pro for a year. I like it, but I would prefer to hand draw my own map (especially if it will appear in my book.)
I have considered drawing my own trees, mountains, etc, uploading the drawings in Inkarnet, then using the tools there to make my own map, put I never got around to it.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Also, I love the map! I don’t know, something about maps of fantasy worlds just gets at me. *Smiles dreamily, looking back towards The Lord of the Rings* I also like the name Huntt for a town; it just seems to fit.
I love the map!!!
Thanks, both of you! One of these days, I will actually make the up-to-date version.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Then maybe it’s a good plan.
Well, the object doesn’t need to be heavy. It needs to leave a convincing imprint on the scene. This the fabric filled sack.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Alan, must you do something stupid????😩
Just met the second crow, but I’m pausing to call something.
I think it’s his mother.
Maybe.
Ooh, good theory.
Seriously, that gave me the ugh-the-main-character-is-doing-something-stupid sinking feeling in my stomach
Same.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
*Suspenseful music plays*
Leo
Great blue stars. Leo’s teeth clenched. A tail, here, halfway home. These creeps really hard no discretion. “Good man. On Zero.”
Three.
He tapped his com unt to alert Silvia.
Two.
Silvia even with them under the pretense of taking Quincy. Her eyes were sharp, fingers twitching over her…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 6 days ago
Ty! Just the effect I was going for. Creepy, but not scary creepy. More of just otherworldly.
Thank you!! Glad you like it! : D
Ok I actually just finished it today!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Smack!
Yay! I’ve been creamed. Now I have eight snowballs….
*grins a disoriented grin*
*falls back into snow fort*
Let’s see what I can do.
Also, adorable scene! I like how you showed what Leon was thinking almost exclusively by his actions. It really made me feel like I knew him.
@ellette-giselle I’m glad you like h…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
@loopylin @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @godlyfantasy12 @rae @raxforge @whoever
I have a fun question! I’ve already figured out my answer for my story, but I asked my friends this question and got so much traction that I wanted to post it here too. I love hearing what different people come up with. My f…[Read more]
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