Ellette Giselle

@freed_and_redeemed @ellette-giselle ooh your blurbs are nice!

@ellette-giselle

That’s sooo awesome!! I love the art!! I’d recommend softening the word color though, the black is a really sharp contrast with the pale cover, but I think it’s amazing!

@ellette-giselle bruhhhhh that’s so true lol

@ellette-giselle

So, on the front cover, I agree that the title feels a little cramped. Maybe enlarge it a little and move your name to the bottom?

Also, I would remove the “By:” and just put your name. In my opinion, it feels more professional, but it’s up to you if you like that version more.

The cover illustration is beautiful!

On the back,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Just finished reading what you posted. So far I like it. What time period would this take place in? I’m imagining Arron in a T-shirt for some reason, but I highly doubt this is set in recent times. In some ways, this reminds me of the books my sister writes. She also writes stories that take place in fictional worlds but could…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

That happens to me a lot.

@ellette-giselle

Looking and squinting at your cover, my eye goes right to the character’s faces. Good. I think the colour contrast is good. I wonder if there is a way to make the title stand out more from the illustration. I think @koshka has some good advice for improvement.

Now I know you are not supposed to judge a book by its cover, but…[Read more]

@theducktator

I usually don’t look at the maps, but I do like having them. There have been some books lacking them, and that makes it confusing to look at where everything is. In the series I am currently reading, I have referenced the map only a few times. I just finished book three. I am more likely to look at a map if it has some illustrations…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

So pretty!! I love the soft shimmery feel of your cover.

My only critique on the cover is that the words feel a little crowded and off balance, like they were shoved into the top of the picture. I might move your name to the bottom of the page, enlarge the words, and drop them down a little bit. Maybe even flip one or both of…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’ll try my best to read through your WIP, but I can’t make any promises since I’m also helping two other people with their stories. (:

@ellette-giselle

That is so cool!!

@ellette-giselle

It sounds really cool! Are you looking for format critiques, or is it too late for that?

@ellette-giselle

It looks so good!! Did you design it yourself?

@ellette-giselle

Thank you!!

@ellette-giselle

Sure! I love book covers and might be constantly redesigning my working covers to a point that it’s probably bad for my health.XD

Blurb away!

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings

Good job, everyone’s looked great! Congrats GRCR!!

@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

Congratulations on the win!

It was an amazing rendition of him!! Great job!!

Thanks guys! 😄😄

@ellette-giselle I might! Is that ok?

@ellette-giselle

Hey, I’m up for anything…… as long as it’s not an abortion. If she aborts the baby in any way there will be problems because there is NO excuse EVER for that.

So, besides that, go ahead and do anything you like! ;D

Oh I didn’t even THINK of that…so don’t worry!!!!!!

I promise there will be no abortions…

I agree there i…[Read more]

@jonas @ellette-giselle

Chapter 8

Monster

What am I doing?

Frustration built up in Lilitu’s chest until he wanted to scream.

But he couldn’t scream….or else Adar would find him.

Cass isn’t going to come bail you out this time, he pressed his lips together in a thin line. You have to figure it out yourself.

He tried to find a comfort…[Read more]