Ellette Giselle

Why does it keep messing up your guy’s tags? Ugh, let me try again.

@rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @keilah-h @ellette-giselle

Deadline for the art challenge is Friday the 6th

Thanks for participating : )

@rae  @linus-smallprint  @grcr  @keilah-h  @ellette-giselle

Deadline is Friday the 6th

Thanks for participating : )

@ellette-giselle ooh I’m glad you put the takeover-by-the-empire subplot back in. I was kinda wondering if you’d forgotten it lol

I would agree with Linus that you probably should draw out the Aaron-Sabina marriage subplot a bit more. Right now it’s not clear if they’re married yet or not.

@ellette-giselle sorry your tag lol

@keilah-h

also, you can take all the writing breaks you need! I’ll be here for whenever you do have a chapter ready for us.

Thanks!

@ellette-giselle
Just had an idea. Rour has been frustrating Alan for a long time. Now that Alan is beginning to realize that The Law is in the right, he will let out some anger at Rour, justifying it by saying R…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I do love the posing! Poor Even lol, he’s not having a good time

@ellette-giselle

Just call him Alan.

Okay.

Hmm, Well, I would have him talk to his dad about how he’s going to cover up hi9s wrong with his good deeds. Then his dad could explain why that won’t work. I think from there that would set the stage from Alan to mess up. Here is a scene from a movie that I really love that deals with that perfectly. It…

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@ellette-giselle

Gah! I knew it! Ugh. I’m just so at a loss in how to step forward in this part because I have NO IDEA how a guy would be thinking during this time, and I have chosen top write the book from Aaron’s perspective!

I’m sorry, I can’t help you much here. I’ve never done this. Maybe you could ask your dad?

Hmmm, Are there any scene tha…

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@ellette-giselle

Oh, Okay

@ellette-giselle

I think I’m ruining it, and it’s really nice but why is the plane flying up? It should be going down. Am I missing something?

@ellette-giselle

I will try this out, thank you!

@thearcaneaxiom

Those are good questions, I will think about these things, thanks.

@whalekeeper

Aww, thank you! I really appreciate that, and thanks for the encouragement.

Thank you all for your advice, I really appreciate it!

@ellette-giselle

It was a long week of prayer before Aaron spoke to Sabina about the idea of marriage. Sabina was very surprised, but Aaron had never seen her so joyfully since her baptism. She asked for time to pray and talk with some of the woman in the church and Alicia. Aaron agreed at once. Two weeks later, Sabina had her answer. She had…

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@theducktator @loopylin @stephie @theshadow @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

I should let you all know. Starting next week, I will not be able to write as much. Not only am I starting three post-secondary courses, but I will also begin a part-time job (finally). I also have learned that I am now the main teacher for my Sunday School class at church, so…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Wow! That was good!

Thanks!

@ellette-giselle

I liked this!! I don’t know if I mentioned this yet, but when you refer to Alan as “the soldier” it kinda throws me, especially since 1) he has a name that we know, and 2) this is something you kinda just started.

I’m trying not to overuse his name, so I throw in some other things to call…[Read more]

@rae  @linus-smallprint @grcr @keilah-h @ellette-giselle

I posted my character description above! Sorry guys, I for some reason didn’t realize I was supposed to tag everybody.

@ellette-giselle

I never meant to say that I didn’t approve of young marriage! I meant that I think it shouldn’t be taken lightly. I agree with Whaley that it is not a sin, it just needs to be well thought out.

Young age does NOT cause divorce. I meant to say that if you are married young on impulse and you didn’t think it through, then it’s…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I don’t think young marriage is a sin! I acknowledge that young marriages can work well, as shown by Keilah’s existence XD Nor did I say young age induces divorce. I’m saying we shouldn’t blindly advertise young people to marry when there are potential emotional ramifications. I personally believe those challenges are better…[Read more]

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@ellette-giselle Considering that you are 18 and fine with early marriage, I trust you when you write about that stuff. I now know you’re not just a 14-year-old thinking that 17-year-olds are super mature compared to you.

You don’t need to change the story in any way. It’s your story, and like I said, my mom was married at 17 and her…[Read more]