Ellette Giselle

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Got it.

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Jim giving Jonathan shoes. It was a sweet ending.

Ohh, right. But other people, maybe.

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:] Mayhaps I will post more when desire returns.

@ellette-giselle

Aww. That was sweet.

Jim seemed nicer to Jonathan before these chapters, but I guess Jonathan was hidden and Jim didn’t have to worry about the others watching.

Did the gang have something to do with Jonathan’s parents dying?

@loopylin @rae @koshka @ellette-giselle @theducktator

Yaay, I actually have a self-contained snippet to share. This is pre-teen Barnes, in case you’re not sure who she is.

The typewriter clicked to a stop, its keys fluttering up and down like the legs of an overturned insect. Lucille opened her eyes. The sun glared through her eyelashes, turning…

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@ellette-giselle

True, true. 😆

@ellette-giselle

Oh wow. So you wrote those two this morning?

Darn. This means I can’t ask for bonus chapters. 😢 XD

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That’s a lot of drafts.

How far through this draft are you? Finished?

@ellette-giselle

You didn’t like it before? Lol.

So how much of this have you written?

It’ll be interesting to see what happens with Viper.

He’s a tough guy who takes in a little kid. Plus, he doesn’t seem to want to be there any more than Jonathan does.

@ellette-giselle

You’re welcome!

@ellette-giselle

I like Jim more and more…

Good chapters! I really like this book.

@ellette-giselle

IT”S TIME FOR FEEDBACK!

The dawn will come

Please remember this is my opinion. You do not have to take any advice I give. These are just thing that I think would be a good idea. Please let me know if you have any questions, or need clarification.

Thank you very much for allowing me to participate in this. It’s been fun reading…[Read more]

@loopylin

Thanks! You really should if you want to.

@ellette-giselle

😁 She’s my favorite character.

@grcr @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @rae @highscribeofaetherium @koshka

Reminder that the goal is to have outlines done by the end of Monday a week from today (if you are doing one.) I come with yet another boring form to fill out. This is to try to help organize feedback groups (since there are too many people for everyone to give…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Chapter the 35th out!

At more chapters than the last book now. But not more words so far.

@ellette-giselle

Okay, have fun!

@ellette-giselle

Seriously got an attitude that might cover some seriousness.

Ohh, have fun!

I’ll probably not get to the chapters till Sunday, as today is a “clean half the campus” day between camps.

@ellette-giselle

Ooooooooo…

*Reads quotes*

*Stares at pictures*

*Nods to self*

Another poor kid, though this one has a serious attitude. Probably a rebel of some sort. Nice.

@ellette-giselle

All I know is one of us is right…

Lolol!

Great quotes. He seems to have a lot of personality. XD

@ellette-giselle

I’ll have to listen to it later with my headphones!