Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle Not sure why you’re so horrified, they’re literally the exact same questions you asked……..

I can confirm, Linus is not an AI, cause if he were, it’d be hard for him to come up with several fantasy races AND keep it consistent throughout. I’ve messed around with generative AI before (although I never use it to write for…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thank you for the feedback! I’m glad you liked it, and to here it is better that the last one in your opinion is encoraging.

Yeah, reading the outline kind of takes those surprises away, doesn’t it?

Sara probably felt underdeveloped because I just kind of threw her in there, so I haven’t spent the time to figure her out yet.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters! The rebellion is reminding me of the church meetings in my story.

Jonathan’s adjustment is pretty realistic. He’s struggling, but wants to please the people who are teaching him despite himself.

I don’t really know why they can’t just let him go–that was a bit blurry for me. I know he was captured and taken…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper

Four new chapters today! 😳

Don’t feel like you have to read them all right away if you don’t have time. This is the end of Part 2.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Here is a link to some feedback questions I would appreciate if you could take the time to answer  for TNPT II:
The Sword Feedback – 1st Draft (In Microsoft Word)

@loopylin @whalekeeper @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @freed_and_redeemed @the_lost-journal @highscribeofaetherium @anyone else

So my cat Marbles had 6 kittens who are now almost two weeks old and I can’t think of names I like for any of them. I will be going back to the update where i last asked for help naming…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Sorry for the wait. But Chapter the 42nd is out!

And this concludes The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword! Thank you for reading! I’ll get some feedback questions ready soon!

@ellette-giselle Nope! Nothing that I saw, anyway.

@ellette-giselle

I do agree with the people who commented on the end of this last chapter; there probably should be some more context before they teach him how to fight.

But I liked the training sessions. 🙂

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters!

@grcr

Whatever feedback, I guess. People might ask for something specific, but other than that, it’s up to you. I’m just trying to set things up so that people can be motivated to write and have people to talk to about it, I don’t care exactly what people want to do.

@ellette-giselle

Ok!

@koshka @whalekeeper @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin @whalekeeper

Okay, I have divided us up into who will give feedback to who. This is split up as well as I could so that everyone gets to read something their interested in, but other than that it’s random.

If the data I’ve received is accurate, there are actually…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Interesting. Are these the rebels?

I have no idea how Jonathan didn’t get shot, but good chapters.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Chapter the 41st out!

Only one or two more chapters after this.

@ellette-giselle

Lolol.

See, I told you, people throw books across the room. If you had ended it there, definitely a book throwing moment.

@ellette-giselle

True.

I don’t know what I expected, but I wasn’t very surprised that the boy fought him. 314 must have been the exception.

@ellette-giselle

The cliffhanger!!!!!

I didn’t expect Jonathan to go chasing after the boy. I thought he meant like, I have to do something… long term. Not immediately. 😂

@ellette-giselle

What in the world!?

I can’t believe you.

Well, I guess I can, but still.

*pouts*

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Chapter the 40th out!

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Chapter the 39th out!