Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle I only read the section you shared today, I picked quite the section to read😭💀

Any thoughts on this section in particular?

Other than I think it shattered me??? 😭

it’s really good, I love the strength they all have for their faith and their determination to stand no matter the cost.

I think it’s sad enough and portrays…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I haven’t been keeping up with all of this, but MA’AM.

way to tear me into pieces on a random Friday morning😭😭

@ellette-giselle

Thanks

@loopylin

Chase

Chase didn’t know what to think of the chaotic sight, so he stared with blank, black eyes, face half cast in shadow by his hoodie. “Why T-teach-er in t-tree?” A single flicker of purple came to Chase’s eyes, then died again.

@ellette-giselle oooh! I loved the bookbinding part!

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 21 out! Not too happy with this one. I’ve discovered I don’t like to write fight scenes.

@ellette-giselle

Sorry I’m late. I spent a long time yesterday finishing up a final assignment. But I’m done school for at least a year now!

It was a bittersweet parting the next day, and Leon and Julian found it more difficult to leave Landstraten now than when they had left on their way to the capital.

Who all is with them right now? You have…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

XD

Probably.

Leo

The kid was…off. Leo watched him shift his back to a wall and glance behind them. Nervous. Strange.

He settled a hand on his shoulder. The kid stuffed a start. Very nervous. Leo swiped his key card over a electronic doorknob and pulled Rory into an employee exit hall after him.

It was quiet in here, the…[Read more]

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Leo

Where he doesn’t have to kill anyone. Leo smiled half because of that interesting qualification, and half despite it. Rory seemed to be catching his balance again. Leo eased his grip on his arm.

“Sounds good to me.”

He held the door for Rory, then fell in step with him. They were going back to the church, the scene of the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle thanks, got it!

@ellette-giselle sure, thanks!!

@ellette-giselle

Leo

Not sure what…Leo looked up.

“A dream proffession? It’s what you wish or dream you could do for a job, since you don’t have to be a soldier now.” He straightened one of the pencils and tightened the wrap. “For instance, Silvia wants to be a research doctor someday.”

He tucked the end of the ace wrap back under itself,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Good section! I like it.

It was a little unclear that the other three men were joining Leon and Julian until now, unless they were in the first scene and I’m completely blaming. I just don’t think we got to hear that they were back yet.

My guess is that since no one has seen the prince’s face, they will replace him with his c…

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@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint

Next two chapters!

@ellette-giselle awesome first section!!

@ellette-giselle

Why do you ask?

Okay. You’re view on end times could impact where this story goes. For example, some Christian believe that over time, the world will get better and we ought to get involved with politics and things like that to make a Christendom. Others might believe it would be nice if our government became Christian, but don’t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ugh. Kingdom Pen decided not to tag me, but I checked anyway because I remembered you saying yesterday that you would have something to post today. And good thing I did! I will have to remember to check myself if I don’t get a notification email.

Anyway… Book!

Not only have we lost two dear friends in Marius and Prince…

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@elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @grcr

Thank you 🥰 I haven’t drawn many cartoon children before, and I should practice more.

That would be neat!

Maybe I’ll get around to making a topic for it, then!

Does his culture not cut a boy’s hair until he’s in knickers/four/weaned/school age?

Hm… *Does not want to say too much*
It’s an unsure cul…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sounds good!

Oh, gotcha, thanks.

@ellette-giselle

I have hope that you won’t kill off all the characters… but am expecting at least one of the MCs to die. 😭😫

@ellette-giselle

Great first section! You did a good job of establishing the stakes and the characters’ situations. One thought I had (for you to consider) is possibly to remove the first journal entry and start off the book with Leon. It might be a stronger beginning… but it works great with the journal entry there too.

Remind me again, who is…[Read more]