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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 12 months ago
I said it was a couple posts back….XD XD I thought it was clear 😬😂😂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 12 months ago
it’s right above where HighScribe says “no spoilers” and right below the post where you said this:
I don’t think this was on your radar when Cass was first introduced, and in several of the early chapters. (am i right?) so, you need to show a little bit of that in him. just a teeny bit. Maybe he can’t stand it if one of hios bro…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
yesss! Idk I just love her sooo much!
I am also shipping her and Aaron so if they don’t kiss at ALL during the whole book I will be sorely disappointed :/
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 12 months ago
Ohhhh okay makes sense!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 12 months ago
thanks!!! I’ve been having a lot of deep thoughts lately XD lol
I don’t think this was on your radar when Cass was first introduced, and in several of the early chapters. (am i right?) so, you need to show a little bit of that in him. just a teeny bit. Maybe he can’t stand it if one of hios brothers is better at him in som…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
I don’t see either, to be honest XD
I see myself in her. I love her personality and…idk, I just want to give her a hug, the poor girl 😭💔💗💗
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
I love these scenes! You’re very talented, and I can see you have a passion for sharing Jesus through your writing! Keep it up!
Sabina is my favorite! 💗 (I also love her name)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 12 months ago
I was wondering when the next part was coming…
Turin, though surprised, spoke gently. “Sabina––”
“Don’t Sabina me!”
This made me laugh.
I am curious to see where this is going. Right now, the village seems more curious than anything, and I wonder if Sabina will turn most of them against Aaron. I suspect she will eventual…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
@ellette-giselle
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Oooh, he looks so cool!!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 12 months ago
Ditto on the comment about gesture, the movement and composition is great in that drawing.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 12 months ago
@ellette-giselle whoaaa
I love that drawing! It looks like it could be the cover of a book!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 12 months ago
My fantasy isn’t a typical fantasy.
It’s combining medieval times with our modern world. So there are cars like we have, and pistols, and other things you’ll see later.
The rules for my world are…there are no rules.
I’m not even sure if this works or not (the author I’m getting feedback from said that they can be combined…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 12 months ago
I like the focus on gesture! It’s good that you’re not afraid to draw action. I have a hard time with that sometimes.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 12 months ago
@ellette-giselle @grcr and @highscribe (CASSIAN SCENE) idk who else to tag @jonas (don’t read this if you don’t feel like it, or are busy…)
Chapter 14
A New Adventure
Sef stood in the kitchen, tears pricking behind her eyes.
The house was so empty…so vacant. It felt wrong.
Her heavy pack dug into her shoulders, an ever present reminder o…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 12 months ago
That’s right, feel free to share art whenever!
(Your post reminded me I have two unfinished sketches I forgot about, thank you for prompting me XD)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 12 months ago
@ellette-giselle lol I have so many memes saved on the phone I share with my brother
Writing memes, Star Wars memes, video game memes, you name it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 12 months ago
@ellette-giselle haha
where’d you find the meme?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
I don’t know, I’ll have to check a little later!
I had a great soundtrack and a great scene too…idk I just can’t make myself write that fast *cries*
But that’s over 2,000 words for the whole day (and almost to 40K for the whole WIP) so I should just be content! lol
Sounds great!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 12 months ago
@ellette-giselle BRUHHHHH
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