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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Ugh, your going to make me spoil the whole thing, are you? It has been a while since I read the final book, but, without giving too much away, here are the lessons that the book leaves the reader with:
Just because you aren’t perfect doesn’t mean you can be a hero. You may have flaws (like small, not very powerful Smedry…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@theducktator @loopylin @stephie @theshadow @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
I will try to get you Chapter the 17th – The Rebel next week, but since I start work and school, no promises. I will send it out in two weeks at the latest, so you can hold me accountable to that deadline.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Sorry, I had not seen your post until now. Gmail decided to throw out the notification again. Alcatraz is one of my favourite book series. I think I have only listened to some of the dramatizations for the second book.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle lol Fin being dead isn’t what’s funny, it’s just the way she said it, like “How’s he doing? Oh….wait….never mind.”
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Thank you! 🥹He’s my favorite of all my charries.
I was definitely listening to Tauren Wells music around the time I named him XD
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
 Have you seen the movie? (Courageous) If not, you really should. It’s pretty amazing. So is the movie Fireproof, which is my all time favorite that they’ve done. Followed closely by Facing The Giants, and War Room.
Yes, I have seen all the Kendrick Brothers movies, except The Forge (But that only just came into theatres). To be h…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
XD yeah, I’m bad at it to. I’ve actually never drawn him XD I’ll have to make some art before they start coming in so it doesn’t influence me.
It’s ok!
Tysm! I’m glad you like him! Yeah, I drew him. That’s my oc Tauren Faulkner, I used to post art and snippets from his wip all the time when I was more active here.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Why does it keep messing up your guy’s tags? Ugh, let me try again.
@rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Deadline for the art challenge is Friday the 6th
Thanks for participating : )
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
@rae  @linus-smallprint  @grcr  @keilah-h  @ellette-giselle
Deadline is Friday the 6th
Thanks for participating : )
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle ooh I’m glad you put the takeover-by-the-empire subplot back in. I was kinda wondering if you’d forgotten it lol
I would agree with Linus that you probably should draw out the Aaron-Sabina marriage subplot a bit more. Right now it’s not clear if they’re married yet or not.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle sorry your tag lol
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
also, you can take all the writing breaks you need! I’ll be here for whenever you do have a chapter ready for us.
Thanks!
@ellette-giselle
Just had an idea. Rour has been frustrating Alan for a long time. Now that Alan is beginning to realize that The Law is in the right, he will let out some anger at Rour, justifying it by saying R…[Read more] -
Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle I do love the posing! Poor Even lol, he’s not having a good time
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Just call him Alan.
Okay.
Hmm, Well, I would have him talk to his dad about how he’s going to cover up hi9s wrong with his good deeds. Then his dad could explain why that won’t work. I think from there that would set the stage from Alan to mess up. Here is a scene from a movie that I really love that deals with that perfectly. It…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Gah! I knew it! Ugh. I’m just so at a loss in how to step forward in this part because I have NO IDEA how a guy would be thinking during this time, and I have chosen top write the book from Aaron’s perspective!
I’m sorry, I can’t help you much here. I’ve never done this. Maybe you could ask your dad?
Hmmm, Are there any scene tha…
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Oh, Okay
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
I think I’m ruining it, and it’s really nice but why is the plane flying up? It should be going down. Am I missing something?
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TheShadow replied to the topic Discernment in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 10 months ago
I will try this out, thank you!
Those are good questions, I will think about these things, thanks.
Aww, thank you! I really appreciate that, and thanks for the encouragement.
Thank you all for your advice, I really appreciate it!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
It was a long week of prayer before Aaron spoke to Sabina about the idea of marriage. Sabina was very surprised, but Aaron had never seen her so joyfully since her baptism. She asked for time to pray and talk with some of the woman in the church and Alicia. Aaron agreed at once. Two weeks later, Sabina had her answer. She had…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@theducktator @loopylin @stephie @theshadow @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
I should let you all know. Starting next week, I will not be able to write as much. Not only am I starting three post-secondary courses, but I will also begin a part-time job (finally). I also have learned that I am now the main teacher for my Sunday School class at church, so…[Read more]
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