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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle wow, I love the cover!
I like the third summary thing the best, I think.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
*Considers adding Rory to the protection squad*
Leo
He sat calmly listening to Rory’s story as his brain malfunctioned.
Child’s army. Child’s army? He flinched, fists clenching at the thought. Great blue stars, if he ever met the people over such a barbaric practice-
He sucked in a breath. Time to be calm and focus on the…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Trust me Rory, you have plenty of company. There are several others. 😅
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay, thanks!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
I’m making a list of the most important characters in this book. Would you say I missed anyone?
Aaron, Turin, Sabina, Noah, Darrien, Joseph
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
You’re good. We have to move around other people’s characters a little bit from time to time. In fact, it can be kinda fun. XD
Leo
It was almost shocking to find fluorescent bulbs still in use. And he’s just replaced it with LED. This place was so outdated.
“Leo… I…”
He glanced down at Rory. The kid was fidgeting slightl…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Very nice! Now you’ll have to figure out how to play with this when you put your name and title on it. Seems you should be putting more stuff towards the bottom based on Aaron’s position. I might actually put your name at the top with this in a smaller font, and the book and series names at the bottom, with the book title in the…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Wow! That was faster than I was expecting. Let’s see it!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
The tunic is a vunny hug (It’s a bit of a cross between a tunic and a hoodie). Eric wears the same.
If you are wondering where the name Vunny Hug comes from, in the Canadian province of Saskatchewan, they call hoodies ‘Bunny Hugs’, so I just swapped the B for a V.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @theshadow @loopylin
As predicted, I am still working on Chapter the 19th this week. In the mean time, I got some older artwork of Martha and Stripe to share with you. (I will do Stripe is a separate post). I will put these into my Google albums as well.

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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Rory: *contemplating death and destruction*
Leo: *caring but oblivious*
Leo
The kid seemed a little tense. Maybe he was just uncomfortable.
Which made sense if he was wanting to discuss whatever had put that look in his eyes.
Leo let the classroom door almost close behind him as he flicked on the light switch.
Five out of…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay. I will review this by weeding through this form then.
Why is it that you do not trust Reedsy? (Just asking in case it was something I overlooked.)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Leo
This was definitely more than a severe case of Ranidaphobia. It looked like the boy needed a therapist. But there wasn’t anybody on staff at the school Leo particularly liked, besides Dr. Winton, who was away with some charity group or other.
Maybe Rory just needed a friend, someone just to talk to.
“Sure. Why don’t you…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
I don’t remember if you’ve posted it before, but I like the gold accents. They are very defined.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@loopylin okay! If you want to have them run into someone soonish, Silvia is currently trying to dispose of toxic waste, which could include the kitchens. But no pressure–I’m not great at RPing two people at once.
Leo
He watched the twins scamper away, one hotly pursued by the other. Sisters. He smiled and shook his head.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper
idk why, but the girls are really hard to write rn. I think i need a break and they need a new setting.
The Twins
Eddie saw the frog shaped clock hanging on the wall of the classroom and jumped.
“We’re late for kitchen duty! Sorry guys, gotta go. Bye Leo! Bye Rory! Bye Ellie’s boyfriend!”
She sprinted…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I know! It’s not the story with Everton and Amidala though. This new idea was still in the works and just wasn’t working out the way I wanted it to.
Ok, awesome!! I”m excited to hear what she remembers!
Oh no way! That’s so awesome! Okay, so it’s going to be in modern times, contemporary. I’m wondering how an Amer…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I will figure it out soon.
@koshka @loopylin @ellette-giselle
Marcel
After floating to their classroom, the children begged Marcel to stay for snacktime. Ms. Charles was more than happy to oblige them, and the boy crouched upon one of the lily pads, chewing absently on a graham cracker.
The students from the basement stopped by, and…[Read more]
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