Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, I like it!! I could definitely feel and experience what Jonathan was feeling and going through.

The only suggestion I would have would be to eliminate some of the passive voice (“The floor was sinking…” “…his brother was on his hands and knees…”). It will tighten up the prose and draw the reader in more.

But that’…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow

Who’s ready for the next scene?

Chapter the 22nd – The Murderer

I need to read Little House on the Prairie again.

The is one character in this chapter that I’m wondering if I’ve gone too far with him. Does it make sense why he does what he does in this chapter? (This…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m holding on to hope that Eric will realize how serious what he did was and come to a true repentance. Though it almost seems to me, (especially after he did that) that he wasn’t ever a true believer but the Saviour was more of almost a”lucky charm” to him. Something to bring him happiness and keep him safe.

Time will tell for this.

@ellette-giselle

Loved that snippet! I like how the reader is just as confused as Jonathan, I kinda felt like I was reading an anime lol.

@ellette-giselle lolllll I think I saw that meme somewhere before

@ellette-giselle ohhh ok.

She looks great in that pose!

@ellette-giselle ehhhh I have weird conversations here too.

Do you think Linus Smallprint has forgiven us for taking over his chat to discuss the finer points of being obsessed with a character?

@ellette-giselle

Ugh, now I’m having traumatic flashbacks to 2020. 😬😂

@ellette-giselle Emily’s cool. Who or what is she protecting with that gun?

@ellette-giselle lol that last one

I have a charrie who would be the same. “Wear a mask” people say, and then he shows up wearing like a ski mask kind of a thing, and everyone freaks out for an entirely different reason.

@power whaaaaa? lolllll

@ellette-giselle green ember quotes!!

ngl I love the writing in that series. It’s the perfect balance of serious and funny sometimes.

@the_lost-journal @ellette-giselle pffft that was a weird conversation lol

@ellette-giselle

Great!! It took maybe fifteen minutes so I should clean it up a little. My pencil battery died and I used my finger for all the shade blocking 😂

@the_lost-journal

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…You are heartless.

@ellette-giselle

Tis somewhat truth indeed we willing to accede. . .

But a Bateyman costume!? 😾

BLAH!!! My fuzzy foot! 😼 (Which perhaps ain’t as fuzzy as it one be, but alas, that’s what haps when one’s doing recon in a rather skinny chimney and a sparkwit must have himself a fire. 💨😿)

We wouldn’t dain to stoop to such perfectly putrid…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle THE GUN ONES BRUHHH

lol

My brother’s OC, Windchill, is basically just that.

Is that dude preparing for an apocalypse or something????

@ellette-giselle

Oh you’re dreadful!

That song is dreadful too. At least, the message of it is.

It’s been long enough since I’ve actually listened to it that I can’t remember the song is message.

By the way, since you shared your concerns on Eric denying The Saviour, I am curious to know what you think of the juxtaposition between his reaction t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

You can do whatever you want. My characters are not invincible and I didn’t mean them to come off like it, if either of them bothered you, I apologize.

Same here. I don’t mean for my character’s to be invincible; you guys just haven’t found a way to actually hurt him enough to stop fighting. Rax can’t heal in the middle of a b…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oh I don’t think Marcel is invincible. He was actually quiet fun to RP with because he isn’t.

Phew, okay good! The idea when attacking Marcel is to tire him physically/emotionally. After a certain point his reflexes stop working and he just swings blindly at stuff XD

 She seems quite stiff and….. maybe harsh, in a weird kind o…

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@ellette-giselle

Barnes isn’t overpowered… She literally doesn’t have any powers and she gets hurt all the time in fights.

Apparently Marcel is tired of fighting and would rather go to the school prom?

He’s not tired of fighting, he was just badly hurt and needs a minute. I must admit I wasn’t expecting him to be healed right away, that was…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I figured if any other agents pop up, it’s Barnes’ responsibility as a new authority, so she’s going to attempt wiping them out as soon as possible. But if they don’t appear then she will just do a sweep of the school and everything will be fine. It’s your call.