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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I was a little distratded during this chapter because I do disagree with you on weather or not it is okay for Christians to lie to protect others. However, I don’t really have a response to the arguments that Sabina gives and I belive this to be a tercarary issue, so unless you want to discus this, I’m willing to leave it…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@jonas YES!
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @grcr @raxforge @loopylin
Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, Elderstrand edge
Brutus sighed, before coughing once more. After which, he harnessed the wind once again, throwing the strong wind at the foremost figure, trying to knock it over. But nothing appeared to happen to the things. Brutus gave a cry,…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Troy was a big hint. I also some some other things from it that poped up in my feed that contained some greek mythology gods/creatures, so I thought that might be the case
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow
Next chapter! This scene was a little fun to write as it uses a new location that did not exist within my first draft.
The last bit of character I want Alan to develop may now be more apparent, Keliah.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Is the musical based off of the Iliad or Odessy?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I mean, they’re technically just NPCs, so yes, (though I would recommend using them sparingly.) In this case, I happen to agree with @rae‘s assessment and will be deploying them anyway, lol.
@whalekeeper @rae @raxforge @loopylin @hybridlore @grcr @ellette-giselle
Ellis — Elderstrand (Group 1)
Within a few seconds, the fight was…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @grcr @raxforge
Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, Elderstrand edge
Brutus held his drenched scarf up over his nose, his eyes shifting to the boy. He didn’t speak, he merely looked the boy up and down, before breaking out into a few coughs. Recovering himself, Brutus walked over the form of the…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
We do need a plan, do we want to get out of the city?
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/ Group 1)
Marcel cocked his head, amused, and shook his fists to loosen them back to normal. “You could have left us a couple soldiers…”
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
The BBC series XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @loopylin @jonas @grcr @hybridlore @raxforge
Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Leon, Julian, Fel, Ellis Sara, Marcellus, and the other Marcellus, our favorite neighborhood godling, Elderstrand Edge (I had fun typing that all out XD)
“You guys should make a quick plan!”
The wind around Brutus rose in int…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m so glad you’ve been drawing and coloring so much! 🤣 It’s been a couple years and we can finally see your own imaginings of your characters.
Ooh he looks like Mr. Darcy. I’m watching Pride & Prejudice right now, lol.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
But is that bad? Can Joseph not love the same thing as Aaron and still be Joseph? If you think it is bad, then……. idk what I’ll do. lol
No, it’s not bad. You just told me to keep a watch for if Joseph starts to feel like Aaron. This is just a place where the two of them could start to feel sort of samey.
Let’s just say that if…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/ Group 1)
More soldiers raced in. Marcel clenched his hands, and feathers laced around his fingers. Kicking up water, he swerved around around Ellis, who acted as final flaming barricade.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Okay, why the uniform? Well, (as will be explained later) Adrian isn’t supposed to be here at all. He’s supposed to be in the Fort or on patrol, not messing around with civilians. So, technically he’s actually on patrol, but he was using the cloak to help hide the fact that he’s going in and out of the orphanage, and the fact th…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
idk where exactly, but in the US 🤷🏻♀️
he, his family, Leon’s family, etc. now all live in the Southern half of the USA now tho.
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freedom replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle I know🥰 and thank you!
you’re welcome!!!
Yessss he is such a cutie🥰🥰 He does love Bucky, although Steve ends up becoming his favorite eventually (but he also adopts Ryo, so🤷🏻♀️💜).
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle That is very helpful, thank you!!! 💜
So, if Riker can play it cool, and not too many questions are asked, I think he’ll make it by
Let’s just hope that no one knows that he’s been out of prison for around 2 years following a 5-year sentence😬
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle I’ve also been trying to research (but can’t find many answers😅) if Germans faced prejudice in post WW2 America (book #3 is in the early 1950s, but still), and if that would affect Leon/Riker’s lives (esp. Riker’s) and them finding jobs, work, etc.
Because also (although this was more common then anyhow), neither Leon nor Riker…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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