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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
😊 Maketh my heart gladeth.
Does it fit how you pictured him? The plushie is yet unclaimed.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Not sure. Maybe because he’s a guardian type, protecting his younger brother. Maybe because he reminds me of a centurion, and I always loved the centurions in the Bible. He doesn’t understand everything, but he has a strong sense of honor.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle Oops, I didn’t see your post.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Lolol. And yeah, I can see what Koshka is saying, but that wasn’t really what I was thinking while I read it. I thought the scene was great.
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Ruth replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Sorry, didn’t see your post when I made mine
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Good. That’s what I assumed was happening.
The emotional/spiritual aspect will be addressed later.
I’m afraid I was more concerned over the emotional/psychological aspect, but I suppose that’s kinda what you meant.
…
*Cackles*
Oh, and I wasn’t sad. I was almost angry. Slightly mad. Highly miffed. And rather sorry for…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay, calm down.
Sit down, relax, take in a breath slowly and exhale. Believe me, doing this a few times helps a lot.
Firstly, I can’t speak for @ellette-giselle but about kicking you off KP, I was not serious.
Secondly, I apologize for not understanding this topic when it is really obvious now that I look at it. Andrew…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @keilah-h @theducktator
Mae Govenen! Thank ya’ll for your feedback. And I will especially thank you for tactfully reminding me to post the extra that fateful Thursday.
As we all know, the extra was not posted.
Fear not, nevertheless! Although we have not posted chapters, we have been writing them. And…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
*Glares*
You killed him. I’m more than mildly miffed at you.
*Huffs*
*Contemplates writing you into a short story just so I can heap vengeance with my pen*
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As to the last section…
This could just be a difference is my own temperament, upbringing, or understanding, but I’m not sure I agree with how Sabina handled the…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow
Sadly, I do not know if I am going to get another chapter to you this week. I had a plan for it, and it was going well, but then one of my characters was taken hostage and is threatening to ruin the whole rescue mission and I can’t figure out how to get him out of there. Alan…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal y’all gotta learn to get along lol
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Heeheehee 😁
Thank you!
why are they all in that uniform? Is there a reason?
Yup, it’s their trainee uniform, since they are warriors in the same team. 🙃
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hybridlore replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Ohh, I’m sorry. I didn’t know that was a rule. 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Oof, yeah, I get that. It is one of the hardest parts about stories, but also one of the things that really makes you love the characters!
I thought it was pretty realistic that the boys would be quick to fight with each other because they are worn out and worried. Sabina’s idea to help them make up was pretty smart. And she g…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yep! lol. I read pretty fast sometimes, but it wasn’t that long of a section. Plus I saw pretty much as soon as you posted it. 😅
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Ruth replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
someone kick him off KP.
Lol
Wyoh, come be a heroine!
@the_lost-potatoe
Did you tag me just because I asked how many potato pfp you had? Lol.
I also have no idea what this all about. You make as much sense to me right now as Nae does to Alpha when she talks in her sleep!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Aww, I love it!!! 🥰
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hybridlore replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I mean, the topic is very broad. It could be as simple as showing the leaves of a tree withering and dying, or the spiritual death and resurrection of a new believer. It doesn’t necessarily mean you have to show someone dying–and even if you do, there’s a way to handle it in a way that doesn’t glorify…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle lollllll
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
I’m kind of confused… is this where we get potato pictures? 😅
(@ellette-giselle Lol.)
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