Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

HA! I actually have a chance?

Please, please, please…. 🙏 🥺 Think of all the scenes you could write!

Lolol

@ellette-giselle

That would make it more interesting, instead of just having more characters die off we’d get to see Eric struggling with his brother’s death.

@ellette-giselle

No no no no no!!!!!! 😭😭😭 Why are you doing this to me, Ellette? 😢

Can’t you just… save Eric?? 😭 They said he could go free…

@ellette-giselle

I thought you said to go ahead and kill them.

Yes, I did in a way. But that doesn’t mean I like to read about the executions. It does get depressing. Especially since we have to be there for it again. At least this time, the crowd reacted differently.

@ellette-giselle

Hmm, wow, must have really sobered you. No comment on the amount of exclamation marks. lol. After I posted it, I looked back and was like, “wow, there’s a lot.” lol. 

*Goes back to look.* 15?!? *Calls a doctor.*

And no comment on the fact that I offed Joseph’ best friends.

You’ve already killed off his father and two very close fr…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay. well, the Stripe one of course. That would be super funny/cute, especially with his ears flat. lol.

Maybe one of Martha and Alan talking. I would like to see Martha in an actual scene.

i’ll have to think more on this.

Do you mean the scene where Alan is about to head out with the Humlers and Oliver to find his d…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

“Today, the gates of every village, town and city will be thrown wide open! You will return to your homes, if you wish. You will farm the land; you will travel and trade where you will within Ardenta!” 

Ah. So there was a positive event in there. This is what you were referring too.

“Let them go!” came a shout.

Joseph looked a…

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@ellette-giselle

Aside from Stripe being hugged, I really enjoyed the chapter.I’m glad you brought the crow back in. I was wondering how long it would be before you tied that part of the plot back into the story.

I haven’t been entirely sure how to fit it in all the time. Especially since many of its scenes are just it watching and Alan being a l…[Read more]

@stephie @ellette-giselle

YEEEESSSS!!!!!

STRIPE HAS BEEN HUGGED!!!!

*does a happy dance* – Stephie

Yippy! Stripe was HUGGED!!!! – Ellette

*Bows*

AWWWWW! it was soooooo cute!!!!!! Now you have to draw a picture of it!!!

Maybe. This is a question I will ask at the end, but so far, what would the top scenes that you would like to see illustrations for be?

@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr

Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge

Flare and Ben looked at on another. They nodded. Off they went towards the river jumping roof over roof.

Ben felt tired, of course he’s tired, he’s old. I’m getting too old for this, Ben thought as he landed on a roof, catching h…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Noo! XD At least, I don’t think so. 🤔😉

@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper

Next chapter! I’ts been a while since I’ve done two chapters in one week, but I got excited by this one and put off some school. So here you go!

This is the chapter where my book will be redeemed in the eyes of Ellette, Ducktactor, and Stephie. I hope you’re all…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

By the way, this article isn’t (or maybe it is) about psychological suffering, but since I’m pretty sure it’s point is what you’re intending in your stories, I’ll share it. It definitely changed the way I think of pain.

And it’s hilarious, so you know. Thought you’d enjoy.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ok, I will say that I enjoyed how it was carried off in this section. I agree with what @linus-smallprint said about that. It reminded me of The Healer by Dee Henderson. (A book about facing the grief of a broken world.) Very good.

What I say is redundant is the fact that it feels like more characters are dying than those who…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay. So you are coming off as a little cold-hearted, but there is something this section did for me that you may be all right with.

This section established the fact that no one is safe.

Protagonist, side-character, mentor, or any of them could suddenly be captured and killed. There is no plot armor. I thought before that you…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Something was about to happen that would change everything.

Why was I expecting this to be something positive? It kind of made the event feel like a slap. (Ouch. I’m feeling Josephs pain.) Unless I misunderstood what this event ended up being?

It also feels more tragic because of how casually Eric and Asher headed out. It was…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Eeellllllleeeeeeetttttttte………

Why shouldn’t you kill them? Well, because it’s getting redundant. I love your story and your characters. The setting has a unique feel of its own and the characters are compelling to say the least. However, unless you have a brand-new absolutely unseen point to make with more death, it may…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ha! I got it right!

😢😢 Please tell me Eric and Asher don’t die too. There is too much death in this book. 😭

@ellette-giselle

😐😶

@ellette-giselle

You shouldn’t kill them because they don’t deserve it.

And it’d be very uncalled for.

And because I really like them.

(I am reading—I’ve caught up and all—I just don’t really have anything to say.)