@ellette-giselle
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
She sounds fun. XD
I totally recommend looking into girl’s/guy’s different physiological in fighting. It’s pretty interesting if you find a decent source, and I know it’s helped with my characters.
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
On the other hand, do you mean that you believe it is wrong for a woman to enlist?
I personally can’t find scripture against a woman joining military, or fighting in real life on way or another.
Now, when women fight, things get ugly. My brother and I have discussed this before, having both done similar research, and I’d like…[Read more]
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Esther posted an update 1 week, 1 day ago
*that feeling when you totally revamp the plot of a struggling story idea but now have figured out why you didn’t like it before and are now totally in love with it*
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
BiNg!
*screen comes to life*
That would depend on what you mean by “norms”. To be blatant, I don’t like crossdressing, and other such greying of lines. I like lines. I also like to know exactly why that line is there, and if it is a good line. As long as this “norm” isn’t a biblical thing, or crosses a line I’ve personally dr…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week, 1 day ago
Can you create a link to share it?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week, 1 day ago
Um, because I like it. Is it bad? I can cut it. I just felt like it was a nicer ending the Sabina crying, plus I have a seven year jump ending in the next one, and a several year jump in the last one.
Well, it just gives away some of what will happen to the characters. That’s all.
As for the cover, I’m not sure what you are using…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week, 1 day ago
But, Sabina is in no place to be reading at the moment. So, this letter actually wouldn’t show up until the second book when Sabina gets a POV in the very beginning. Do you think it would be better to shift it to book two. It would be Aaron’s last letter, and it would be unread. So, the reader would know he wrote it, but never kno…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week, 1 day ago
No, wait, your not supposed to be one yet! Grrrr. (Explanation: I told myself I would get the next scenes fully edited and cleaned up before you or Keilah got on and commented on my WIP. I failed. lol)
Because you asked me whether or not Aaron I thought Aaron would die and I assumed it would be answered in the next section, I…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
I could not ignore how cute those cartoons turned out!! 🥰 Love them!!
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Esther replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
I subscribed to this topic so I keep getting notifs 🤪
But this is an interesting conversation. I think I can agree with both points you ladies are making.
Yes, men and women have roles predetermined by God. I’m not going to marry some guy who relies solely on me to protect and provide for our family. (Nothing against stay-at-home dads, but you k…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 week, 1 day ago
The time hath arrived for you to submit a character description. Writeth one up when you are ready and tageth the artists.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week, 1 day ago
after one of my friends started crying over the rough draft and melting the words on the paper I had pretty high hopes for this scene. 😉
Hee hee. I know that feeling.
so, do you think he’s going to die, or do you believe he’ll get out of this?
At this point I could see it going either way. It seems your main thing for Aaron is tru…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @ellette-giselle
*Peeks through cracked door*
Totally following y’all over here from the Castle…
So, ai didn’t read through everything above spoken (because my phone is rapidly loosing it’s life, and I’d have to go get my charger to revive it…) but here’s a few thoughts:
Why can’t a woman fight for a man? Not out of…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week, 2 days ago
Do you really want me to answer that question?
Well, if I had a physical copy of the story, I would know. But I suppose this could spoil weather or not Aaron survives. I know this is a trilogy, but book two could pick up with Sabina or someone else.
My Dearest, Dearest, Darling Sabina,
Tomorrow I am going to die.
I thought for a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@calyhuge @loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Leo
He shifted Quincy higher on his shoulder. The kid sighed, tucking his fluffy blonde head against Leo’s neck. It looked like Quincy wasn’t waking up anytime soon.
“I’m Leo. I work here.” He smiled at Kate and Brian. “And this little monkey is Quincy, my kid brother.” Or at least, that’s what the…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Tlc & mcu crossover fic in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@smiley LOVE IT!!! 😍😍
(and thank you🥰)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 week, 3 days ago
Coming back in here to see who won. Congratulations!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 week, 3 days ago
Aaron and Sabina planned the wedding quite quickly after he proposed, but there’s nothing wrong with that. A) This is a different culture than ours and, B considering the fact that danger is lurking around the corner all the time for them now, so it makes sense that they would want to get married before something happens.
Oh,…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Awwwww😭 I love it ❤️
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
@lightoverdarkness6 oh Girly, don’t apologize!!! I’m just honored you want to read it🥰🥰
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