@ellette-giselle
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 14 hours ago
Alpha being awkward again.
Remember when he left money under Dante’s pillow after hearing a little girl talking about the tooth fairy! XD
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 14 hours ago
Nar
She sighed. “I guess. What is the matter with my family! Alpha is…well, Alpha. Nathan is so nerdy you can’t hold a decent conversation with him. Marco is just an idiot and Nar is so cute that you can never say no!”
“You got that right. Those blue eyes, chubby cheeks and little button nose are adorable.”
Nar swung around in…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 days, 15 hours ago
Awww, they’re so sweet.
He’s pretty much perfect.
I suppose I always saw her with longer hair, but she’s adorable. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 7 hours ago
Leo
He’d been right.
“Rory, sit down please.” His voice was low, calm. “There are no cameras in this hall, or mics in this room. I’ve checked before for Quincy. So unless you’re bugged yourself, we’re still good. Which, if you are bugged, don’t worry. I’ve worked pest control before. There’s only One all-seeing, and He happens…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 9 hours ago
instinct forcing him to brace for the moment this all shattered and Leo turned on him.
GAAAHHH…
Have you heard the song Soul worth Saving by Apollo LTD?
Leo
“No problem kid.” His voice was husky around the lump in his throat. He gave Rory’s shoulder a light squeeze. “Really, no problem.”
The boy tensed, then relaxed, t…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My Friend is trying to get on KP in the forum Questions and Support 4 days, 12 hours ago
It took a few weeks for them to create my account. He should get an email about it sooner or later. I’d say don’t worry too much about it unless it’s been like a month or something. She should get to it before then.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 12 hours ago
*Considers adding Rory to the protection squad*
Leo
He sat calmly listening to Rory’s story as his brain malfunctioned.
Child’s army. Child’s army? He flinched, fists clenching at the thought. Great blue stars, if he ever met the people over such a barbaric practice-
He sucked in a breath. Time to be calm and focus on the…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 13 hours ago
Yup, that would be right. Joe Sutphin is one of my favourite artists and has heavily influenced my drawing style.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 14 hours ago
Okay, thanks!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 14 hours ago
Think of the characters you are most anxious to have feedback on
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 14 hours ago
I’m making a list of the most important characters in this book. Would you say I missed anyone?
Aaron, Turin, Sabina, Noah, Darrien, Joseph
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 14 hours ago
You’re good. We have to move around other people’s characters a little bit from time to time. In fact, it can be kinda fun. XD
Leo
It was almost shocking to find fluorescent bulbs still in use. And he’s just replaced it with LED. This place was so outdated.
“Leo… I…”
He glanced down at Rory. The kid was fidgeting slightl…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 14 hours ago
Very nice! Now you’ll have to figure out how to play with this when you put your name and title on it. Seems you should be putting more stuff towards the bottom based on Aaron’s position. I might actually put your name at the top with this in a smaller font, and the book and series names at the bottom, with the book title in the…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 14 hours ago
Wow! That was faster than I was expecting. Let’s see it!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 14 hours ago
The tunic is a vunny hug (It’s a bit of a cross between a tunic and a hoodie). Eric wears the same.
If you are wondering where the name Vunny Hug comes from, in the Canadian province of Saskatchewan, they call hoodies ‘Bunny Hugs’, so I just swapped the B for a V.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 14 hours ago
And here is Stripe:
This is his first draft design, which is a little different from his second draft design. Kunulfs were different in there and some had attributes of different races. For example, you may notice that Stripe has sheathed claws here, like a lion. No, I don’t want to talk about it. Trust me, the way Kunulfs are now is much…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 14 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator @keilah-h @stephie @theshadow @loopylin
As predicted, I am still working on Chapter the 19th this week. In the mean time, I got some older artwork of Martha and Stripe to share with you. (I will do Stripe is a separate post). I will put these into my Google albums as well.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 15 hours ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 15 hours ago
Rory: *contemplating death and destruction*
Leo: *caring but oblivious*
Leo
The kid seemed a little tense. Maybe he was just uncomfortable.
Which made sense if he was wanting to discuss whatever had put that look in his eyes.
Leo let the classroom door almost close behind him as he flicked on the light switch.
Five out of…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 days, 15 hours ago
Okay. I will review this by weeding through this form then.
Why is it that you do not trust Reedsy? (Just asking in case it was something I overlooked.)
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