Ellette Giselle

@highscribeofaetherium

Well excuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSE me, princes!

@highscribeofaetherium

Did I make you change your profile picture?

Alan Becker is such a good YouTube channel. Me and my one sister are currently obsessed with it, wondering why we are so attached to stick figures. Alan is an excellent storyteller and does a great job of showing instead of telling.

Favourite stick figure? (I have to go with Red)

@keilah-h

Nice dragon! Did you model that?

@linus-smallprint

Aaahh the Link drawing! 🤣🤣

@linus-smallprint

I am very much behind, but reading the rest of it all at once will give me an idea of your pacing, too. Will get to it soon and will give feedback!

The question you accused of being AI generated may be the only one on there that is not.

Bruuuhhh

@ellette-giselle ahhh ok

@rae

I immediately thought of Marlo and Oakley. :]

@ellette-giselle Not sure why you’re so horrified, they’re literally the exact same questions you asked……..

I can confirm, Linus is not an AI, cause if he were, it’d be hard for him to come up with several fantasy races AND keep it consistent throughout. I’ve messed around with generative AI before (although I never use it to write for…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thank you for the feedback! I’m glad you liked it, and to here it is better that the last one in your opinion is encoraging.

Yeah, reading the outline kind of takes those surprises away, doesn’t it?

Sara probably felt underdeveloped because I just kind of threw her in there, so I haven’t spent the time to figure her out yet.…[Read more]

I’m kind of behind (and a little stuck at the moment :/) but I’ll hopefully have my fist chunk soon.

@rae

Hmm… maybe Winter? I can’t think of anything else atm.

I like Hybridlore’s suggestion.

@linus-smallprint

ALAN BECKER DOODLES YES I AM NOT ALONE

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters! The rebellion is reminding me of the church meetings in my story.

Jonathan’s adjustment is pretty realistic. He’s struggling, but wants to please the people who are teaching him despite himself.

I don’t really know why they can’t just let him go–that was a bit blurry for me. I know he was captured and taken…[Read more]

@rae

Aww, they sound adorable! Sir Fluffyface is such a cute name 🤣

Name them after characters. That’s always a solid choice. 😉

Thunder has a new tail! I didn’t make the model, but I colored the tail.

@rae Do you have any pictures of them?

@linus-smallprint @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper

Four new chapters today! 😳

Don’t feel like you have to read them all right away if you don’t have time. This is the end of Part 2.

@linus-smallprint I see you’re an Alan Becker fan!! My brother loves watching those. They’re so cool.

@whalekeeper

Hero forge is a cool tool! It’s not that hard to make a detailed miniature of it.

You have inspired me to share the random doodles I did with my brother on a smaller piece of paper. I’ll let you guess who did what.

Also, I feel honoured to loose The Game with you.

@ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theducktator

Here is a link to some feedback questions I would appreciate if you could take the time to answer  for TNPT II:
The Sword Feedback – 1st Draft (In Microsoft Word)