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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Those are hilarious!!
I liked the new chapter. It was cute.
PLEASE don’t kill Rory though.
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Jaybird posted an update 1 year ago
Box of Dreams
I have a little box of dreams
I keep it to myself.
Though sometimes when the sky is gray
I take it off the shelf.I have a little box of dreams
Each tucked in tidy rows.
Locked away from light of day
For God alone still knowsI have a little box of dreams
They hide there all inside
Lest someone else might come along
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
skill issue.
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Dang
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago

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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@loopylin @i-dont-know-who-else-to-tag-cuz-im-tired
Check out this sick box camera I found. Made in the 20s. I can see upside down images through the lens and there’s a flash when I flip the shutter. I want to find some film and try it out, although the inside is warped.

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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Is this POV yours? Real life local mysteries are unironically the best thing ever, unless they involve people getting hurt. I had a missing criminal hanging around my mailbox one time. Those things are the spice of life.
You should research what chemicals might change colors like that.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year ago
BRUH LOL IT DID
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Enid replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year ago
The image worked! Nice.
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Enid replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year ago

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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Well… we aren’t at the end of the book yet. 🫣
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Yay! KP is back!
Good chapters. They made it out of there pretty easily. I thought that was going to be tough…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle I really gotta get caught up, the past few days I haven’t been able to read them (been using my allotment of screen time for other things)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
You’re welcome!
(Odd how it’s so clear in your mind and then someone tells you what they though you said and it’s not at all what you meant. I find this in writing and in speaking.)
Yup. Another reason for proofreading.
If you have another book later on that doesn’t have Christian rebellion as a major component, I will be hap…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@whalekeper
That’s a lot, haha. I bet many of them are siblings to the protagonists.
Well actually yeah, pretty much! 😅😆 Siblings or (school) friends lolol.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
You’re welcome!
For Alec’s arc, I was expecting him to do something in the climax that would impact either Sara or Cole. Prehapes both of them. Something like helping Sara, telling Witlock that he can’t work there anymore, helping Cole ‘protect’ Sara, or even standing up to Cole and trying to stop him.
I think chapter 55 wouldn’t…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Wow! That was so tense! I can’t wait for Cassion to tell them!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Thank you so much!
I know some of us were discussing this during the book, but I like the idea of showing Sara and Cole’s closer relationship in the beginning of the book. I’m going to look and see if I can insert this into the early chapters.
I see what you mean about Alec being a pretty stagnant character during the book.…[Read more]
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