@ellette-giselle
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Esther replied to the topic Children’s Fiction in the forum Genre-Writing 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Thank you so much for your input!! You’ve given me a lot of inspiration to draw from and I loved hearing what parts of books impacted you the most when you were younger!
Write not only for their “now” but also for their “tomorrow.”
Remember that souls are the same size, no matter their age.
I gotta pin these on my wall…
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
I enjoyed it!!
There were a few things that I thought weren’t as good as they could have been though. I felt like Leon became pretty repetitive for at least half of the book. Isaiah kept saying similar things to him and he kept responding the same way. It did show how bitter he had become, but I did find it redundant and n…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 weeks ago
@theducktator
Awh the singing cans are so cute!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
@theducktator @loopylin @stephie @theshadow @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
I changed my mind. There is one more scene I want to write before The Rebel. Chapter the 17th is now The Role Model.
With this chapter, I have now reached 50,000 words! Whew!
Question for you all. While this series is primarily directed towards believers, I want un…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 weeks ago
*goes back in corner to sulk because not only did the bomb not explode in your face but you picked up the wrong one altogether*
I’m sorry. I have a too-healthy sense of self-preservation to pick up explosive things. I guess I really did go after the fish instead of the shoes. (Next time don’t tell me there is supposed to be a big…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 weeks ago
I think something is keeping this plot twist from being effective. As far as I can remember, there has been no talk from any of their characters about fleeing from the land. You’ve already told us that the characters were trapped in the city for over a year. I was under the impression that they had accepted this fate and all…[Read more]
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-GRCR- posted an update 4 weeks ago
Roan Rallar was in his late forties. In his arms he held a female infant, which was his only granddaughter of the newborn triplets. A toothless smile lit her little round face as she smiled up at him—her bright eyes fluttering open and closed. The little girl and her triplet brothers were the children of Roan’s nineteen year old son, Rei. Rei…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 4 weeks ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 4 weeks ago
Congratulations on your third win!
Jonathan’s clothing looks more professional than what I picked up from his description. I imagined him dressed casually in a tee-shirt.
@theductator
A request for when you submit your description. When I created this challenge, I intended it to help authors develop their ability to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
Gotcha! =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Leo
He smiled again, vaguely trying to remember how people shook hands here as stood to take the offered hand.
“Ha, no. My school years are long behind me. Which reminds me,” he glanced around the dim break room. “students shouldn’t be down here.”
He gave a half sigh. Two girls were standing in the shadowed…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@loopylin Actually…wait a minute.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Heyy we’ve reached 400 pages! 🎉
HUZZAHH!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Where even is Danté?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@loopylin And I didn’t see your post before sending in my last RP. Just assume he didn’t hear her while handing up on Silvia.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle @keilah-h (is Hunter here?)
Leo
“-just a lab table, nothing important. I don’t even think the teacher is mad at me this time. She even-“
Movement caught the corner of Leo’s sight, a blue of color reflecting off his thermos. He looked up.
A young man stood staring at him from the doorway. Something about the kid made his back…[Read more]
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RAE posted an update 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@loopylin Hi! Been a while.
How have you been, Loopy?-
Hi! Been good, I think. I’ve done a lot more creative stuff lately and I started a YouTube channel for making art videos. How have you been?
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Oh, really? What channel is it? If you don’t mind sharing ofc.
I started rowing for the fall season. I actually have a race on the 28th. It’ll be my first.-
That sounds fun! So you’re on a team, right? I don’t know much about rowing.
Here’s one of my videos: https://youtube.com/shorts/mb_aUKERe-g?si=MtRYGc1e03MkokAT
I’ll probably lose interest in the channel in a couple weeks and abandon it, but for now I’m enjoying it XD-
Yeah. I’ll be in a four with other girls.
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I just checked out your vids, and I love it!
I recognized a few drawings but I had no idea you did that much art! And I didn’t realize you drew so many Dante’s! You’re so talented! -
Thx for sharing!
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@rae thank you so much! Yeah I draw a lot, but I get anxious about spamming the art topic so I don’t share that much. Thanks for watching them!
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@loopylin oh, don’t worry about spamming us! We all love your art!
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Can you imagine:
THE MARCEL DELIVERY SERVICE
Snacks delivered from a cloud
You could probably think up a better name than that, but you get my point XD
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