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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 4 weeks ago
This was the second time someone had claimed him with that familial title. He was beginning to like it.
Aww <3
Dante
They shook hands, finally formally introduced. Rory cocked his head to the side. “Brother…?”
Dante looked at him sharply, a bit confused. “Don’t call me that.”
The doctor came in, and treated his wounds. He…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 4 weeks ago
Lucille
There was another door ahead; gray, with wooden panels, it was the kind of door that hid along an equally gray wall in a sagging house.
“I want to know why it’s here.” Lucy got up and, after some thought, played a descending scale.
The floor creaked. As Lucy played, the room shifted like a ship at sea, and when she looked at the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 4 weeks ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel flinched at the loud boom of the piano cover. He cast Lucy a glance, making sure she was okay, before peering inside the piano. “It does have strings.” He hit one of the keys, watching the hammer strike the corresponding string inside the piano, silently fascinated.
Eventually, he dropped his h…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 4 weeks ago
‘Racist Hospital Workers Let Kid Die.’
😂 I’m dying
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 4 weeks ago
Dante
The hospital was close. Rory helped Dante walk to the bus stop, and then rode with him to the emergency room. Rory seemed tense and wary on the bus, but then, so was Dante. They picked a seat near the door, and kept an eye on the other passengers.
When they arrived, a nurse told them that a doctor was available to treat…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 4 weeks ago
@loopylin
Yep, those are the rules I remember -
whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 4 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy had to choke down a snort. She took the piano lid and pulled. It was heavy but had no hinges. It fell off with a thunderous boom. She scampered back, lost her balance, and sat down suddenly. Dust rose and she let out two sharp sneezes.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 4 weeks ago
Sounds good to me!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months ago
@rae thank you! My dad said the same so it looks like this is a keeper!
My prose is weird lol. I kept it in my style (sorta like my fanfic) but I also wanted to inject a bit of the style from books I like.
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Ruth's profile was updated 8 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
So I’m thinking of the rules my school played with as a kid:
1. If someone catches a ball mid-air without fumbling it, the ref sends in one of their teammates who got out.
2. You can dodge or block a ball coming at you with another ball that you’re holding.
3. You start out with all the balls in the middle of the court, and everyone has to rush…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @theducktator
Felicity
Shoes squeaked on the gym floor as Marcel’s team spread out. Felicity found a place somewhere in the middle of the gym. She did some arm stretches while eyeing the other team. There were a few people she recognized: Viktor, Lois, and one of the twins. She finished her stretches, and began b…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months ago
I read it, and I have to say, it immediately captivated me.
Not only does the Prologue promise us a swash-buckling tale of heroics and battles, but I find the prose rather enjoyable. It definitely has that storyteller feel like Uncle Garth in Secondhand Lions (if anyone gets that movie reference). Maybe not exact, but it reminded me of…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Thanks <3
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
@theducktator Ugh headaches are the worst. Stop looking at screens and drink some water. Hope you feel better soon <3
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
When Lucy tried to play the piano, Gabriel relaxed, realizing it was merely an instrument. He pressed a few keys exploratorily, sneezing as the dust traveled under his mask and into his nose. “Is it a magic instrument? Most the ones in my world are ones you have to blow wind through to work, or have s…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
BAhaha XD
I think it’s safe to say this is a weird place and there can be weird random objects scattered within. Maybe that says something about the labyrinth masters, not so much the piano itself.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
@whalekeeper
I love how Lucy is wondering why there’s a piano in the room, while I’m over here like “It couldn’t be empty, and just a couch or chair is boring, so piano was the first thing I thought of”. Zero deep meaning just a brain who was trying to rp while listening to a streamer talk about a mech video game. -
whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Lucille
“You’ve…” Lucy trailed off, brow furrowing. She clacked her fingers over the keys and tried to play a folk song, but only knew a few seconds of it.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
“A piano? This is a piano?”
Gabriel touched it gently, dust flying into the air. He jumped back defensively as an off-tune note rang in the air from the key he pressed.
“Is that normal?” He watched the piano like a curious kitten, not sure if they should attack, ignore, or play with it.
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