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Jaybird replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
I’ll just casually pretend that I didn’t read that.Pure genius! 😉
I probably should go through and add things to differentiate/clarify. I most likely will, idk.
The first two chapters of this book are really difficult, but I promise things become a bit easier later.
Got it! And I get the struggle. You don’t want to info dump or…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
XD
Dante
The chair moved down the sidewalk a couple yards before slowly rolling to a stop. Dante turned to see Rory’s puzzled expression, and then burst out laughing. Then he doubled over, holding his side.
“Heh, ow, hehe… there’s no way that wasn’t a bit,” he said, barely managing to hold back more laughter. “Seriou…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Ah. No one “on screen” got shot, just the neighbors in the background, if that makes any sense.
😜
🤍🤍
I also thought it was interesting how Elia’s comment “it’s dangerous out there” put all the danger outside, so when it was followed by cozy family time, we felt safe inside. Like the Igby Cottage in WFS. Then ev…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Ok! I’m back! @whalekeeper @rae IDK how we’re gonna collide with each other but ehh whatever.
Soldier
I beckoned with a wing toward the door, and Sniper followed me, Huntress still unconscious on his shoulders. He set her down in one of the rooms.
I decided to try to look through the cupboards in the opposite room. Maybe there was…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
None of that sounded like a definite answer, so Lucy shrugged. She was just as interested in becoming a secretary, anyway.
A clap of thunder rumbled in the distance. Bugs chirped louder as if getting their last voices in before something louder arrived. Gabriel and Lucy sped up, jogging over leaf piles and patches of heather.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @ducktator
Oof… Celerant just put Viktor in an awkward place. His deep sense of justice won’t like that. XDViktor
He was going to have a headache. Not from a strike or anything, but from this whole unruly ordeal.
“Great job!” He passed a ball to a lanky kid with the aim of a sniper. The kid nodded and pegged another…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
XD
Gabriel Mai
“That depends. Right now? No. You don’t have the strength nor the experience. In the future possibly, though I will say, there is yet to be a woman monster hunter where I am from. But if a woman had the will, and the strength to back it up, I guess it could be okay, though women should be protected like children…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle The Tangled one is me when I read my one fanfic that I spent half of 2024 writing lolllll
I vacillate between “Why did I write this, this is weird” and “This is peak writing, I love it”
The other memes are so accurate too haha
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Because she’s a diva? 🤣
Lucille
For a while, neither of them had anything to say. Lucy slipped the leather cover onto the hatchet, and they moved on, the tree’s fallen leaves trailing behind them. While they had spent time there, a darker mass of clouds had approached on the horizon and the wind howled somewhere above their heads.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 2 weeks ago
@rae @elishavent-pidyon @mineralizedwritings Y’all are SO GOOD how–
@linus-smallprint I love your style, it’s so cool. I don’t know if there are Narnia graphic novels, but I’d totally read one drawn like that. Your characters’ eyes are very expressive.
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Jaybird replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Emrys set Blaine down and tilted Bennett’s face upward, “Of course I’m coming home today! I have a couple days off and ten little beans waiting to party with me.”
Bennett’s face lit up, “Are we gonna watch a movie?”
Awwwww
Mam…” Blaine stared adoringly. Without hesitation, he knew what he must draw. First a circle, because all good things start…
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
He’d hate her attitude XD, but yes
Gabriel Mai
When the screaming quieted, Gabriel answered. “Pretty much, though I don’t know what a Chee-wa-wa is. Ditching them? I can’t. At the moment, the village I live in has had an increased number of attacks despite the population not growing by a large amount, and a few new varieties of…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 9 months, 2 weeks ago
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Broooo I just realized you and Rumi from K-Pop Demon Hunters would get along
Lucille
“You save their butts from dying and they hate you because of irregularly distributed pigmentation? These people sound stupid. Chihuahua brains. You should ditch them.”
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Jaybird replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Those are great. I think there’s a little bit of crazy in all of us. XD
Also, the last one is fabulous. I don’t think I’ve done that as an author, though. I’m usually the reader watching on in horror, lol!
Ivyyyyy Greeeeeeennn. Nooooooo!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 2 weeks ago
By “kid” he’s obviously more of a teen, lol.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 2 weeks ago
I actually have a similar drawing I could use some critique on. It’s of Elrond as a kid. I intend to add Elros too. (I’m only a little bit of a LotR/Silmaril nerd, unless it concerns these two. I realized how many amazing twin brothers are in this family, and now I want to know their story, lol. And write a fanfic. Save their uncles… 🥹 The…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel shook his head. “It isn’t proper for a Protector to share his secret with many people. Besides, if they discovered my birthmarks, the fact I’m the Protector wouldn’t save me. I’ve already been marked as a demon by my previous village, and they’ve all seen the Protector fight at some point or another.” The red…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 2 weeks ago
I don’t know who got shot!
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