Ellette Giselle

@hybridlore

Okay I can change that. It won’t do anything to the plot.

Lol 😂😂 I like Roland

haha, me too.

Poor Leon. He is now stuck with two impulsive companions.

Also, I’m starting to see the personality differences between Julian and Leon and I love them 😍

ME TOO!!!!!

Just out of curiosity and to see if I’m getting everything across, w…[Read more]

@hybridlore

no, it makes perfect sense.

He’s an awesome character and I wanna see him more.

He’s my favorite so I want him to die.

@hybridlore

WHAT! NO!! A character like Alec needs a lot more spotlight!!!

He also needs to die.

I WANNA READ CHAPTER 13!!

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!!

Sorry I’m late. Busy today. But, I think it’s a little longer than normal. 🙂

“Thank you so much for the meal, Liesl. It was wonderful,” Julian said.

Liesl smiled. “I’m glad you liked it.”

“So, what are we doing today?” Roland asked. A…

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@hybridlore

great progress!!!

I love this chapter! You really suck me into the game planning which is great because I normally find scenes like this super boring in books. It’s crazy but whatever you did has made it so that I can completely picture the game!!

I sure like Cole.

When’s Alec coming back? he was my favorite!! *puppy…[Read more]

@keilah-h

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

love the cake!!!!

@loopylin

idk, KP actually glitched one time because highscribe called me such things so it blocked me for being a threat or something. I’m gonna look back and see what she said. I may end up doing it and scaring a few newbies.

Well, because the pocket knife is replaceable. Change isn’t too hard to come by. The picture….. well he can’t get…[Read more]

@rae

Alpha’s gonna be so mad lol

this is too good.

@loopylin

I would’ve gone for the photo. Nothing like a good photo to hold hostage. 😉

@linus-smallprint

Oh, I get it. I thought Quinton was the name.

Okay….. hmm. This’ll be interesting. Your grandmother is a woman of good taste when it comes to names if I do say so myself.

If Kleins and Roland aren’t important to the story anymore, spending too much time with them may only make the reader disappointed when they are left b…

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@linus-smallprint

Uh…. not really. It’s kind of a mess.

So wait, how many brothers are there. I got Julian, Roland, Adrian, and Quinton, (almost because I had a Quin)

Are there two or three more?

I was kind of surprised that Leon and Julian are headed out since for both of the previous books, the protagonists just ended up staying with…

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@hybridlore

okay thanks! I’ll think about it!

@hybridlore

okay, well I may wait until next time. i have a tone of stuff going on. We’ll see. 😉

@hybridlore

That sounds like a lot of fun!I might have to do it.

When is it?

@hybridlore

what is it?

@hybridlore

haha! And you made the rules if I remember correctly….. XD

@hybridlore

You threw ten at me, now I threw twenty back.

The 50 I’ve been saving for a rainy snowy day.

@hybridlore

I wrote 500 words.

I wrote 700 to be exact, but I’ll save those.

I shall now snowball you!!!!

SNOWBALL X20

AND

YOU HAVE TO WRITE IN YOUR WIP COLOR OF HOPE OR I WILL HIT YOU WITH 50 SNOWBALLS!

SO.

THERE.

@hybridlore

HYBRIDLORE!! I’ve missed you!!! (even though we’ve still be talking while I was gone. XD)

So glad you liked the section!

Yeah, poor Roland.

@rae

Nice!!! I like it! Very good scene! You had me pretty tensed up! XD

Yes, this really was a good scene.

I bet he’s gonna die in the end.

One small problem I had….. the father is encouraging Baron and Jenna’s relationship, but Baron is not a Believer, and God commands that we no be unequally yoked. I would think that if her father was…[Read more]