@ellette-giselle
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
I’ve encountered Karl’s in my day. Guys who can quote scripture up and down, but live in complete lies, yet they try to make it look like you’re the enemy.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Yes, that was the Stiens
Hmm, interesting that you should say that…………. I agree that the villain on the inside is a fun twist. I like this too.
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Ellette Giselle posted an update 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Hey, I can’t get over your pfp!! Is that you and Andrew? (outside of church is what I would guess)
I’d love to know the story behind the picture. If you’re willing to share…..
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
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(btw, there was a short section before this that only Hybridlore commented on, and I’m not sure if the rest of you got tagged. I’ve been told tags are acting up.)
Julian and Leon stayed in Clonabay for two week…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
You are very welcome.
And remember…. I know where you live now…. I will hunt you down and I will find you if you do not post more soon.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
YAY!!!!!
Oh wow!!!
I love this!!!
Okay, two things I noticed.
One, you used the word “fell” twice in one sentence referring to the pen.
two… I got the characters mixed up a bit….
Brin and Brinni are the same person.
Krazsimir and Kras are the same….
who is Vrati?
Is he a third character?
If so, could…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
You got the section from today I’m assuming….
Or did you write that in reply to what I said yesterday?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@freed_and_redeemed  @hybridlore   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty  @linus-smallprint
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Sorry this is so short. Bridal shower and 3 graduation parties……… plus more. It’s a crazy day……..
The next morning, Leon and Julian enjoyed a hearty breakfast with Amarin, Adeline, and Andreas.
“Ho…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Of course. I’m thankful God could use me to encourage you in any way. He will help you, if you but ask.
Here’s the full verse and reference.
No trial has overtaken you that is not faced by others. And God is faithful: He will not let you be tried beyond what you are able to bear, but with the trial will also provide a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 weeks ago
Well hey, God has made you this age at this time for a reason. The Devil would love for this year to be a complete and total wreck, but the good thing is, you serve a King who is far higher than any prince of darkness. Pray for strength, get out your Bible and read, (psalms are a great place to go when you’re having a hard time)…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
as a character
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
it’s an alternate Europe. If that makes sense.
yeah. Â That was a roller coaster chapter. Any thoughts on Andreas?
Oooo! I’ll have to listen to the song!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
Ooo, mysterious.
sadly, he’s not any of those. He was very much an Andreas, so I’ll have to find a name with the same flow, beats, meanings, and rhythm.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
They found thirty of fifty+. The others just are no where to be found. So they might be dead.
And yeah they hated it. It was basically a fortress for the Christian operations.
Ah yes, “I”
Does that make sense?
Yes, it does. In fact, I like that idea. I’ll make a few tweaks.
I was confused through these paragraphs.…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
Odd, I didn’t get tagged when you commented.
Good. I’m glad the timing is right.
yes, it is sad for the university, but that’s not a place they would just let alone.
Well actually, it’s Julian who recognizes Andreas, not Leon.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
June 17th     Â
The EmpireWe’ve been traveling for two days now. No sign of soldiers, thank God. The closer I get the stronger I feel that this is indeed what Go…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks ago
Well, in Europe, except with a bit different geography. So Ardenta is a Celtic/French mix, Vendailia is Saxon/Britannia and the Empire is Roman/Germany
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Yes, that is me and Andrew. It’s actually outside of the house of a CC parent.
In CC, we have what is called Protocol. It’s like prom, but instead of dancing and partying, we go to a 3-5 course meal and then a concert or play. The idea is to learn manners. We did a 3 course meal, then went and saw a concert of the men’s singing group,…[Read more]
Oh that’s so fun. It’s exactly how I imagined you two would look like in a situation. 😂
I wish our homeschool group did that. We just have the Winter Formal, no parents allowed. It’s pretty sketch.
Also, I’m guessing Andrew’s is from that same event? Those pictures are so fun! I love them!
Yes, Andrew’s pfp is from the “funny” picture we took as a group. He just cropped out everyone else.