Ellette Giselle

@keilah-h

well good.

@keilah-h    @hybridlore

Exactly. She is not a love interest.

Also, another reason her and julian interacting  a lot wouldn’t be a good idea is because she has not had good involvment with men so she is really, really raw in that area and needs extra space.

@hybridlore

No problem. I guessed I’d get your attention with the second scene rather then the first. 😂

Well, I mentioned that Julian didn’t ever go down there, so his reputation got around through gossip rather then his own words.

She will become a part of the church, but she and Julian will not really have any scenes together. 1, it’s not…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yep that’s true.

YES!! Thank you! It is!

@hybridlore

If you can pause a moment in your sorrow over Leon, what did you think of the scene with Julian and Rosalind?

@hybridlore

Yeah. A friend told me to split it or else he’ll wait to read it when he’s in solitary confinement. 😂

@keilah-h

Yeah! I’m glad you mentioned Julian. Most of the focus seems to be on Leon. I wonder why………… 🤔🤣

Do you think I’m really gonna tell you that?

@hybridlore

I don’t know. You see, because I split Leon and Julian’s story, this book got to 1200+ book pages, so I’m going to cut it in half, but it’s still one full book on the Word Document. I think we only have about 100 Word Doc pages left before the place I planned to split the book, but I could be mistaken.

@hybridlore

Hmm, I’m not sure.

I think we have close to 100 pages left.

@hybridlore

Please tell me you’re not really going to kill him off.

*goes back and rereads section*

He felt himself shaking and he tried to twist away from the source of the blows but couldn’t. As darkness closed in, the pain began to lesson until all he could feel was fire burning through him.

The overseer struck again and again and aga…[Read more]

@hybridlore

But Albee has…..

@hybridlore

Why not?

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NEXT SECTION!!

One evening, Julian was walking home alone from visiting a family and bringing a basket of food Adeline had prepared for them. It was growing dusk, and he was almost out of the alleys when a voice hailed him. “You, stranger, it looks like y…

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@loopylin

Noooo!!! You can put Rory in jail, but leave poor Leo alone!!!!!

@rae

AW!!!

They’re so cute!!! I really love that!

They’re super sweet!

@hybridlore

seems to be a mutual favorite!

Looks like that scene is a good one. 😁

I’m excited to see if/how Leon reaches Ian.

you may regret saying that…………..

@keilah-h

That happens to me too. I think it’s a KP thing.

@whalekeeper

Oh. I thought Barnes found him dead.

nevermind.

he didn’t kill him.

@koshka

I think whaley decided that he did.

Rory left him wounded.

Barnes found him dead.

*shrug*

BESIDES! The thug was beating him up and was gonna kill him!

@liberty

Do you have an actual game this is based off?

There were several games like this medieval children played, and later on they evolved to Jacks and Marbles. So in a way, yes.

Aww!!!😍 I love this part!

Me too! So glad!!

I’m pretty sure Aelic is remembering the priest from his town when he says this…and how that guy wanted to sac…

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@keilah-h

Well thank you!! Children characters always drive me insane. I dislike them so much because they are written so badly. We either have super tall toddlers or super short adults.

It’s something I really try to get right, so thanks for mentioning it!