Ellette Giselle

@keilah-h    @linus-smallprint    @hybridlore

 

Okay, here’s a question for y’all.

So, I personally really like Julian’s speech/sermon, whatever it is. (I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣) Anyhow, I really like some of the themes it hits, I like the flow. Basically, I perso…[Read more]

@keilah-h

 

Well, first off, this is Julian we’re talking about. Leon had more understanding for them. Second, this is really their first time going through something like this. The last time was in Ardenta, and Ardentans have a certain brute stubbornness and willingness to just hang on that a lot of other cultures don’t. (That’s part of why…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

 

I don’t know who fell apart worse, them or the church in Clonabay.

 

Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heavan will be.

mkay, that works. I’ll try to pull some of that in.

 

Have these three actually been participating in idol worship, or is J…

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@hybridlore

 

Hmm, the problem is, I’m trying not to drag things like “greek” and “hebrew” in because that muddies the world a bit because it is technically an alternate reality.

 

Well, it’s a bit of a chopped up version (due to space. Who made the rule of 100 characters anyways?!) But it’s a Chesterton quote that reads,

“The great march of…[Read more]

@hybridlore

 

Thanks.Yeah, they’re like right at the center of everything, so it’s not easy.

 

Ah, yes. It was a run-on sentence into the next paragraph, and I tried to clean it up with punctuation and forgot to change some words.

 

 

The definitions are the literal Greek translations for that word. There are two words in Greek that make up…[Read more]

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NEXT SECTION!!!

 

The next morning after breakfast, Julian and Leon began making their way along the streets looking for the homes of the three men they had left to lead the church: Konner Krüger, Reinhold Meier, and Fox Keller.…

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@rae

WOW!!!!!! THAT’S AMAZING!!!!!!! I love the drawing, the idea, the story, the feel, the look….. OH MY WORD!!!!

@keilah-h

 

Me too. Hue’s a fun character.

agreed.

 

Not gonna tell ya. 😈

@hybridlore

Yeah, Hue was a character who needed to be saved.

@linus-smallprint

 

Ah yes, now I get it.

People can’t just cheery pick verses.

@linus-smallprint

*blink*

Now I’m just confused.

@linus-smallprint

 

I’ve encountered Karl’s in my day. Guys who can quote scripture up and down, but live in complete lies, yet they try to make it look like you’re the enemy.

@linus-smallprint

Yes, that was the Stiens

 

Hmm, interesting that you should say that………….  I agree that the villain on the inside is a fun twist. I like this too.

@the_lost-journal

 

Yes, I would die for them.

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NEXT SECTION!!!

(btw, there was a short section before this that only Hybridlore commented on, and I’m not sure if the rest of you got tagged. I’ve been told tags are acting up.)

Julian and Leon stayed in Clonabay for two week…

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@koshka

You are very welcome.

 

And remember…. I know where you live now…. I will hunt you down and I will find you if you do not post more soon.

@koshka

YAY!!!!!

 

Oh wow!!!

I love this!!!

 

Okay, two things I noticed.

One, you used the word “fell” twice in one sentence referring to the pen.

 

two… I got the characters mixed up a bit….

Brin and Brinni are the same person.

 

Krazsimir and Kras are the same….

 

who is Vrati?

 

Is he a third character?

 

If so, could…[Read more]