Ellette Giselle

@keilah-h

Probably Don.

I love him so much.

@hybridlore

…. and then he got pushed off a building.

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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

PART 2

@hybridlore

The question is…. is that good or bad? 🤣

@keilah-h

perfect!

@keilah-h

No problem.

I’m guessing that means you just read the chapters? Or did you not get to it yet?

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CHAPTERs 14-15!!!!!!!

@hybridlore

I know! Poor guy!

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Chapters 12-13!!!!

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Theme song for Jonathan in current stage of arc and somewhat forward.

@hybridlore

Oh, I forgot that chapter ended there. 🙃

Yeah, they’ve turned in plenty of people. For Jonathan’s parents it was more Agent retaliation. We’re here to pick up the kid. You don’t have the kid? Fine, you pay for it. That sort of thing.

@hybridlore

what was sweet?

No, the gang was not involved in that one. They were killed because they hid Jonathan.

@whalekeeper

woah! That was crazy!

Thanks for sharing!!!

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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

@hybridlore

Yes. I did.

Well, you could….. I’d just have to write it……

@hybridlore

I do two chapters each day and then post them. I may jump the gun today so that I have some fallback though.

@hybridlore

This is draft number…… 7. I think.

I wrote this when I was 13 and have done rewrites almost every year since. This time I scrapped the draft and started over completely since I know the story inside and out. I feel like I can breathe again and it’s going much better.

@hybridlore

Do you!!? I like him too. 😁

I’m so glad you like it. I’m actually also starting to like it as well.

Any thoughts about the new situation Jonathan is in? Also, out of curiosity, what makes you like Jim? (I like him, but i know his whole arc. I’m interested to see what you like. )

@linus-smallprint

Thank you so much for this! It was really helpful!

btw, Tintin is THE BEST. 😁

@linus-smallprint

Yay!!!

Thank so much for all the help you have given. I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it!! I shall take a look now.