@ellette-giselle
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 months, 2 weeks ago
ACK!!! I haven’t got Spotifi so it won’t let me listen! *sobbing*
I’ll have to go through and look up each song. Which song is for what btw?
OK, the first one has to be lilitiu
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh my goodness, this is great. I have one.
You know your a writer when………… you have been doing bad things to your favorite character. Then, at Bible study they ask if anyone has a prayer request and you get ready to raise your hand with “Yes, I have a really good friend who is going through a really hard time.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow
Ok, here is the next part!
“Aaron, Aaron wake up!”
Aaron opened his eyes and blinked in the sunlight. Turin was standing by his bed. Aaron sat up in confusion. He couldn’t remember having gone to bed. “Where are we?”
“In the tavern. You fell asleep yesterday afternoon. It’s now nearly supper…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
*sobbing* He looks WAY to old!!! I loke MURDERED him in that drawing.
Why did I post it?
Can I unpost!!!!!??????
ack! He’s horrid!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow
Ok, here is Turin. I am seriously cringing right now. Ugh. I HAVE to redo him.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
I’m just basically looking for structure edits right now. This is my 4th draft, and after I go though this I’ll pass it on to my grammar/formatting editor and then move forward into getting it published. so, basically trying to make sure the story is solid, the characters are 3D, and the plot line is interesting and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
so sorry, I had to find her.
This is from three years ago, so it’s not very good. i should really redo her.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow
Anyone, (specifically Sara because this is her favorite.) Want to see a drawing of Sabina?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months, 2 weeks ago
well, I got this one. Hmm, yeah, technology always has something wrong with it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
You are so welcome! Write fast my dear!!! (Otherwise I will hunt you down…..)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
I’m so glad i could be of help! I cannot wait to read this!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
savannah_grace2009
Oh my goodness. when I read that one line…. it was like someone stabbed me. Oh, this is gonna be sooooo good! I cannot wait to read it!
Ah, so, plot twist, it’s Elroy who gets the redemption!!! I’m really liking this.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
NO NOBODY IS DYING!!!!! WHAT IS IT WITH YOU AND DEATH?!?!
Oh what? Man. Fine.
It’s not that I want it to be sad, (sad is great in it’s place though) But Christian death scenes can be so beautiful though. Especially when dying for another, and/or as a tie-off to a redemption story.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Like Jonas said, this isn’t a direct correlation. Pythonos do, in fact, represent evil people AND demons. No person is irredemable, as I said earlier in this post. God can save anyone!
Ok, I was just thinking that you were saying they are unredeemable. If that’s not the case then no worries. Sorry if it seemed like i was c…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks @jonas
Yeah, I think we just hit the major plot-hole. I think you need something between Pythonos and people. You see, even the most depraved of people do not become demons. They can certainly become demon possessed, but they themselves will not become demons. And Christ has the power to cast out demons. (I can find…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Fine. But sometimes the good characters gotta die.
But there’s a problem there. When we chose to live in sin, or even directly comit evil, there is still hope for us until death. Even the vilest of sinner can be redeemed by the blood of Christ. If you make Pythonos unredeemable, you are almost saying that the blood of…[Read more]
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