Ellette Giselle

@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed

Jonathan just got himself into a bad situation if anyone is…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

It was really good! I don’t think I have any comments on that one!

As for what @keilah-h has been saying, I can’t say that I agree. Stuff like that happens, and Like I said before it was not graphically mentioned and it has a purpose. As for age ratings….. ugh, that stuff is so stupid now. It’s been so twisted and more…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Thank you! Yeah I would love help doing a good back blurb. Do you have any ideas or info you need?

@keilah-h

Yes, I do!! You have to order from my company through mail. I have a link to the order forms if you would like me to send you one. So far I have not put it on Amazon yet, though that’s going to be one of the next…[Read more]

@theducktator

No, not a practice tutu, unless she was rehearsing a performance. It would be a satin-like wrap skirt.

@theducktator

Ugh, my reply didn’t load. grrrrrr,

I was wondering if I could give Crystal a skirt with her tights? like a ballet one. (professionals use them. My mom was a professional dancer and an owner of a dance company, and I’ve done ballet a few years myself) anyhow, I dislike outlining girl’s legs like that, and would really prefer…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I think I should have written stuff that should be rated higher then a PG13 if it was a movie. lol. (Violence level anyways.) I think it really matters why you’re writing it and what is the goal and the message and the point. ya know. And also how graphic it is. as it was, Sara’s chapter was not graphic at all.

@linus-smallprint

Lol, does this help.

Ardentan Royal Guard

It’s medieval. Very medieval.

I’ll post some more tomorrow! Thanks for the feedback, I love it!

@freed_and_redeemed

I love the pinterest page!! Great job!

OK, you guys had GREAT feedback! This is just what I needed.

Ok, the blurb on the back…… I am HORRIBLE AT WRITING THOSE!!! I can NEVER EVER write a good one! I hate it when they spoil the story, but I also want them to sound interesting. If anyone is good at writing…[Read more]

@hybridlore

It sounds really cool! Are you looking for format critiques, or is it too late for that?

I’ll take an critiques you have. (I just may not use them if I don’t agree. lol.) But yeah, critique away! That’s why I showed y’all!

@esther-c

Yes! I overlaid a pen drawing onto a water color background, tweaked a few things with the design program, and there it is! I designed the publishing logo as well!

I love that I can only do one image at a time. grrrrrr

@koshka

Ok, here are the back and front covers of my book!

@keilah-h

yeah, go ahead. I’ll call next time.

@savannah_grace2009

Oh I didn’t even THINK of that…so don’t worry!!!!!!

I promise there will be no abortions…

I agree there is no excuse, we live in such a MESSED UP world!

Awesome!! Glad we’re on the same line there!

I really liked the next chapter, though I really hate it when people get stubborn like that.

@savannah_grace2009

Ummmmmm

There’s more sad where that came from

heh…heh…

Hey, I’m up for anything…… as long as it’s not an abortion. If she aborts the baby in any way there will be problems because there is NO excuse EVER for that.

So, besides that, go ahead and do anything you like! ;D

@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed

Would anyone like to see the cover of my newest book I’m about…[Read more]

@theducktator

haha! This is crazy! OK, I look at maps when battles are described so that I can get a picture of the strategy, and I sometimes look for traveling, but not much. My brother pours over them though. I likes to memorize the map and then constantly returns to it. I think the quote from Prince Caspian would be appropriate…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Wow, that definitely did take a dark turn. I’M EXCITED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS THOUGH!

Now Sef will have a baby brother or sister! Man, what a dark way for that to happen though. It’s going to be cool seeing Sef’s protective big sibling side come out!

@keilah-h @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theducktator @grcr @rae

Congratulations everyone!

Yeah, when I saw GRCR I thought, “Game over, that’s the winner” lol. It was an amazing rendition of him!! Great job!!

Who would like to submit the next description?

I would unless someone else is going…[Read more]