Ellette Giselle

@whalekeeper

But Turin and Edwin died.

I’m just telling the story.

lol.

We’re a good two-thirds (?) through.

I’m not gonna change what happened to them. That would change the whole story!

I’ll look back and try to add some fun scenes with Turin and Aaron…. if I can find an appropriate place.

Glad he’s reacting well.

I like how all his…

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@whalekeeper @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @theloonyone @stephie @theshadow @theducktator @keilah-h @grcr @hybridlore @calyhuge @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian

Awesome! This is perfect.

Ok, I have one. This will be mostly for guys, but if any girl’s have ideas…[Read more]

@rae @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h

btw, how does August 21 sound as a due-date. It’s two weeks from today.

@rae @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h

K…….. after a long deliberation….. I think I have decided. I don’t really have any exciting fantasy characters, cause fantasy’s not my thing. I just have boring old normal people. lol. So, my character is:

Prince Friedrich!

He is the lead in…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Awesome! Thanks you! Glad this is coming off realistic.

@whalekeeper

Can I get some of those Ten guy’s tags from ya? 😀

@rae @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h

Y’all ready for a character?

@linus-smallprint

AWESOME!

And that is why answering this question is hard.

No kidding!

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper

Ok, I have the next section, but before I go on I would like some feedback on the beginning stages of Aaron’s reaction to his grief.

That night, men and boys slowly trickled back to the large building. The Imperial…

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@whalekeeper

None of that makes sense! haha! I can’t understand how you do that. I guess there are some blurred lines here and there. lol

@linus-smallprint

This makes no sense to me.

What?!?! *Face-palm. takes deep breath and looks at you. puts on very patient voice* How is this not extremely logical and the ONLY right way of thinking!

lololol.

That was on my mind as I was typing up my response.

Haha! I love that video. (And I may or may not go red every time I see it.)

I…

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@linus-smallprint

I would expect Turin to start punching things, but not Aaron.

Exactly. That’s what I was thinking too!

I hear when girls are upset, you want to just simply talk about it and how you feel. When I rant about my problems, I am not looking for someone to sympathize with me (even if I think I am). I am looking for a solution.…

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@linus-smallprint

First off, you guys are like alien creatures. None of these things you listed would be NEAR my response!! I would cry and want to talk to people and be held, and probably bury myself in writing or books if I was responding badly. haha!! I think it’s so funny how differently we think and react.

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@linus-smallprint

K, Linus, I have a question for you since you’re the guy on here, (though the girl’s can answer if they want)

What would you like to see happen next with Aaron? I’m not talking about Physically as much as emotionally and spiritually. I had a few different ideas in my notes, and his “post-battle” “post-death-scenes” recovery is…[Read more]

HA!! It worked!!!

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @theshadow

Ok, here’s whoever I didn’t just send.

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGNLN4vwu8/ho7hf2rHakWJ1OTFshCmlw/view?utm_content=DAGNLN4vwu8&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link&utm_source=editor

hmmmmm, strange. It worked. Then why has it been eating the posts every time I tag people………….

Let’s see if this works.

@theshadow

Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!!

Here are Aaron and Sabina

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGNLB5MuwA/CfZLSJQSuKkBbOXrIA6HDg/view?utm_content=DAGNLB5Muw…[Read more]

Ugh. It’s broken.

Let’s try this again and see if this’ll send.

@freed_and_redeemed

Sounds good!

@linus-smallprint

Thanks for understanding. I just feel like all that would be too overwhelming and confusing for me. Ya know. I kinda liked how I had the setup.

Yeah, kinda like a mood board.

@theshadow @whalekeeper

Here is Turin y’all!!!

What! NO!!!! PICTURES ARE BROKEN AGAIN!!!!!! ACK!!

Ok, here is a view link…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Congratulations Freedom!!! I’m so excited for you, (and so excited for me, because I want to read it!!!!!!! lol)

@linus-smallprint

Ok, I have never had anyone say this to me before, and a lot of (very picky) people have read it. I think i might leave it alone, because the majority of my readers are fine with it, and I have also read many books that do this and have never had any complaint with them.

Sorry, I’m not sure extatically sure what this m…

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