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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 1 day, 1 hour ago
ALTERNATE ENDING!!!
Julius lowered his head, but beyond the taunts of the voice, he could feel something. It was like the warmth of the sun’s first rays creeping into the courtyard. It was a tiny, tiny sliver of peace. Julius found himself looking back at Marcus and Flavia. I was there for them. A voice w…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 1 day, 1 hour ago
I do like the ambiguity of the ending, I just wanted to make sure Julius chose right lol.
well, now that there’s two of you saying it and not just one, I feel more inclined to go to go dig up the alternate ending from it’s hiding spot. lol.
It is good thing, it shows that your book has an impact on the reader.
Yay!!! I’m so glad!!
Your…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 16 hours ago
between 5:00 to 6:00 in the morning
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 19 hours ago
It’s 1:30 over here. Hmm…. Yeah, it’s the morning that I write the best in. I can’t think in the afternoon and evening. I am a 100% morning person.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 19 hours ago
No, i like never write in the evening. I normally try to get off before 2:00 at the latest.
We would be opposites wouldn’t we. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 19 hours ago
Awesome! I’m not consistently writing today because it’s the 4th. You want to try it out tomorrow? I’ll be writing in the morning.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 20 hours ago
Oh! I basically do that all the time! lol. So I would just tell you what time I’m “sprinting” to?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 20 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 day, 20 hours ago
Hello Esther!
Awesome! I will get to work on this as soon as I can! I’ll prob. have it by the day after tomorrow, but maybe tomorrow. we’ll see! Thanks for the reference pics!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 21 hours ago
I read super fast too, which is why I would like to know what the world is like so I can concentrate on the plot. lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 22 hours ago
Actually it was “Cassian ran, trying to outrun time itself”
Oh, whoops. sorry!
I used to try explain everything in the first few chapters but got told I was info dumping….
So now I’m too scared to go back, and I don’t know how to explain everything without doing that!
Help???
well, I can say personally that I get annoyed w…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 1 day, 22 hours ago
I read the last two chapters and that hit me hard too!!!
I almost cried….😭😭😭💔💔
I’m kinda cheering right now, even though I know that sounds really bad……..
I need to read it all the way through again!
Wow!! Really? That’s awesome!
So, what is your opinion on the end? should I leave it unknown like it is?
Thank you so m…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 23 hours ago
Ahhhh!! I decided to go back to the beginning and scroll through all of the pages to find more about Riker and Leon, because I was intrigued. OH MY GOODNESS!!!! Ahh, I have to know more! I weeded through 100 pages and I need all the story! Please get this published, and if you have, tell me where to buy it!! I love what I’ve…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 days ago
Awesome!!! I can’t wait!!
Your drawing of Shadow’s character looks sooo good!
Thank you!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 1 hour ago
Hello!
Happy 4th of July everyone!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 2 days, 2 hours ago
THATS THE ENDING?! Nononono it can’t be the ending right?! Julius chose to die right?!
Well……. I had a crazy idea to leave it like that with no one ever knowing. However….. I can add one sentence that will change the entire ending and then you would know the answer to that. However, I also liked the unknown ending as well. what i…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 2 days, 19 hours ago
So that is the end. I await your reply……….. and possible outrage. lol. However, I have to kick off to do some stuff, so I’ll prob. get back tomorrow morning.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 2 days, 19 hours ago
Chapter 16
Julius closed his eyes tightly. How did they do that? How could they face death so unafraid?
Ignatius voice broke in through his thoughts. “They walked out there was taking a twilight stroll. I must admit, the courage of these Christians is impressive.”
Julius felt sick. He could still hear the lion roaring out the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 2 days, 20 hours ago
Thank you! I’m glad it was good. I’m also glad it hit hard, because I wanted it to, ya know. Chapter 16 is almost done.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: (A.D. 60. Two friends in Ancient Rome.) Questions in the forum Historical 2 days, 20 hours ago
@theshadow Here you go!
Chapter 15
The cheers and stamping of the crowd sounded like thunder above them. Flavia flinched at the sound and clung to Marcus’ hand. Marcus swallowed hard and looked up at the roof above them. He knew the people were waiting up there, feeding their lust for blood and violence on the gladiator fights. From somewhere n…[Read more] - Load More