@ellette-giselle
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
GIRL!!! You’re gonna make me cry! ‘
Rory
Rory hung on to Leo, pressing his face against the older boy’s shoulder. For a time he wept, and the relief was frighteningly sweet. At last he forced out in a choked voice, “Leo, I… I want to go back to the church.”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Rory
Rory swung his foot against the floor and sniffed hard. “Two years ago. I… I was fourteen.” He rubbed his scared arm again. “I couldn’t go near planes again. I knew they would kill me, but I’d rather die then go up there again. I thought they would find out… but then i was transferred to another base. I don’t know why.” He…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Poor Rory. I actually feel bad.
Rory
Rory hoked back another sob and sucked in a shuddering breath. “My navigator was injured. The fire got him across the right side of his face, neck, and shoulder. He…. he broke down and started crying, and I held him. He was just a kid, Leo. We all were! It was the first time I had ever seen one…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Maniacal laugh.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Ha. Leo would ask.
Rory
Rory stepped into the break room. “I… I don;t know. Just an engine. An engine that didn’t work…”
He sat down on the couch and stared at his hands. “There were four of us, Leo. It was a new plane they had built. It was like a fighter jet, but a little bigger, and there were two gunners, a pilot, and a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Of course! I only wish I’d seen it sooner.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Because Alistair is an amazing name. Not fit for a duck-thing.
😂
*screech of annoyance*
KP IS NOT NOTIFYING ME AT ALL ABOUT ANYTHING!!!!!
I loved this so much!! It was really, really good! I love your style!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
It says access is denied. Is there any way you can let me on? My Microsoft email is
rosewood.debate658@passinbox.com
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
AHH!!! NO!!!
I never saw this!!!!!
I was snooping on someone’s profile and tracked a comment down here and that’s how I found it!!! Ugh. KP! I’ll look at this as soon as I can. I try to respond to everything I get tagged for, so if I don’t respond it;’s because I didn’t get the tag.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 4 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Ooo! Mystery!!
Rory
Rory laughed in a choked sort of way. “Everything. I don’t have good memories, Leo.” He paused. “Well… I guess I wouldn’t want to forget the church… or you… or holding Quincy…” his voice trailed away. He lifted his shoulders several times. Images flickered through his mind. The child under the bed… tiny hands shie…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Leo’s voice reached out, grounding Rory in the present. He followed the older boy out into the hall. His legs felt shaky, and he whipped his sweaty palms against his pants. He tried to shake away the memory but it still clung to him, moving the images in his mind with reality. Rory forced himself to focus. Leo was real, this hall was r…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Leo is amazing.
Hey, Rory. It’s alright. You gave me a bit of a scare there. Thought you’d just got burned. But…”
This just feels so natural! I can literally hear his voice in my head!
Rory
Rory could feel a tremor fighting to shake him, but he forced it to keep still. Leo’s calm voice reached out, pulling him back to the world h…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Good for you!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
LOVE IT!!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
NO!!!!
Rory
When the fire flared and the torch began it’s whispering hiss, Rory felt himself jerk back. A scream echoed in his mind. They were spinning, falling, going down. He couldn’t get free. Do something! Don’t let us die! Please! The scream of his friend clawed through his mind.
The bar slipped from Rory’s hands and screeched…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Rory
Rory nodded and picked up his pace a little. He forced his knee to bend as he walked, keeping himself steady though tears burned his eyes, causing them to blur. He took in a slow breath. He would be fine. He had hidden injuries before. He’d had to. When weapons broke…….
Rory shook the nightmarish thoughts away.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Rory walked slowly beside Leo. He was relieved that he was allowed to question, but he was also scared to do so. Things were so muddled. Rory wanted somewhere to go that made sense. That was safe.
He wanted to go back to the church.
For a moment he almost asked Leo, but he held back. Instead, he asked, “Where now?”
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