Ellette Giselle

@hybridlore

Yes.

@koshka

Look. you got under 200 words.

I’m not going any shorter.

I hardly got to say anything I wanted.

It’s awful, isn’t it.

In the city of Edran, the government had imposed strict control, monitoring every word and action. Daniel, Shelton, and Ezra Darman were not ready to cower. Their goal was clear: disrupt the government’s…

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@koshka

you beast! I’v tossed ten stories since I last posted.

100 words! are you kidding! What kinda story is that!

My shortest one was 400, and I hardly set the stage.

@koshka

Don’t tempt me to repeat the actions of Flint in the video I just sent. I feel like y’all are picking on me.

What on earth!! You hit me with a snowball and then demand flash fiction!!!! My worst nightmare!

How. Dare. You.

@hybridlore

Thanks so much!!!

@freed_and_redeemed

You got tagged above. ☝️

Shucks.

I changed Ruth’s name to Hope in one sentence. I was almost positive I had on accident.

@hybridlore

I know I included a longer passage, but that is something that I think I’m going to do in some situations. I want to have God’s word very clearly there, backing what I’m saying. I do have the scripture passages indented in the actual book, so it will be easier for a reader to just skim if they wanted.

Okay, I can work on the…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

Okay Linus, I put that part in that you suggested. I plan on having it just after Stephen and David bring their friends, and I left part of that in this section so you can get the flow. I hope this fixes the problem you mentioned.

Thoughts Anyone?

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@liberty

Thank you. I love to draw. 🙂

See ya! Looking forward to your reply!

@liberty

We sure do!!!!

Here’s the back to The Crimson Rose.

I’d love feedback on the blurb. I want it to catch your attention, but not give too much away. Here you go.

 
Three Stories. One War. One Faith.
In the shadow of World War II, Josef faces a terrible choice. Desperate to avoid the inevitable conscription to the Eastern Front,…[Read more]

@liberty

This one is The Choices We Made

I drew the picture and laid it over a blue background.

@liberty

here’s the cover for Fateful Night

@liberty

Oh cool! Thank you!I’ll have to check that out! I love older cartoons. Like the Tintin TV series, or Liberty’s Kids, etc. It looks like the art they did for the animal Robbin Hood!

Nope, this isn’t Fateful Night, cause that’s already written and published.

This is my newest WIP called The Crimson Rose.

@liberty

what do you think of the story section? as interesting as Friedrich?

Wait……. redwall got made into a movie!?

@liberty

I’m back. Here you go.

                  Reuven’s hand was shaking, so he dropped it into his lap. Opening his book, he let his eyes trail over the pages of Latin verbs. He had faithfully continued to study, even after leaving university, and he knew these words by heart. Still, he forced himself to read over them slowly and careful…

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@liberty

Oh, yes, Friedrich is from TCWM

@liberty

Everyone knows Flint. Everyone in that town knows everyone. It’s a very funny movie. You should watch it. We watched it one night when we were moving house. We had been working since sunup and it was close to twelve. Everyone had been in tears once that day, all the packing tape was gone, and dad was like, “Okay, I’m ordering pizza and…[Read more]

@liberty

liberty!!! I’ve been waiting all morning for your email. I love to talk people silly with this sort of thing, and no one else really likes to listen. lol.

Okay, the word count is…….

Fateful Night–> 90,923

The Choices We Made–> 888,823

Oh that’s so cool that you have your sister to help you!! No, I haven’t heard of InD…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I know right! To bad you didn’t post it at the beginning.