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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
Alright, I believe now we are back on track.
I’ll put a little from the previous section in here. We are now back to just after Joseph’s letter to Sabina.
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Sometimes I feel so inadequate teaching the people, especially when I train up Mr. Caddick, Da…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh good. I saw this and I was like, “Oh no, it’s a long response. This might be bad.”
Didn’t your mother teach you not to slam doors around?
Didn’t you ever accidentally do it when you were in a rush and weren’t thinking? lol.
Someone’s going to need to snap him out of it eventually, but for now, this is good.
Good. Goo…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Reuven (Robert or Bobby) Malter is a Modern Orthodox Jew, and a teenage boy. He is smart, popular in his community, and has a head for mathematics and logic. His father wants him to be a mathematician when he grows up, but he desires to become a rabbi. then on the other side, Daniel (Danny) Saunders: a Hasidic Jew, who is also a teenager.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
COPY AND PASTING THE TAGS DIDN’T WORK. I THOUGHT YOU GUYS SAID IT WORKED!
It does work. You just have to put about five spaces between each one, and make sure there are no “.” after each tag.
All I’ve ever done on KP is copy and paste.
It works.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
There’s Josef, who’s Aryan German, Reuven, who’s Jewish, and Werner, who’s a boy from the alps and became a doctor.
I don’t think I’ve posted anything with Werner yet.
I’m glad you like them!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper  @raxforge  @loopylin  @hybridlore  @grcr @jonas
Leon and Julian —with Group 1
Julian slowly rose, his eyes narrowed. He took a few steps forward until he was standing right in front of Rogun. “Listen, I don’t know who you are, stranger, but Leon is hurt, and I think the best option is staying put.”
“Julian,” Leon calle…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Yes, Marta is blind. This is a huge hitch in the story………..
I do look for particular quotes like the ones I used, if that’s what you’re asking.
I’m glad I’m giving inspiration! Ooo, that sounds like such a cool story! I’d love to read it sometime! Mine takes place in Germany, because I find there are a lack of stories from…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Well, alright. I guess the snowballs can be a complement. lol.
what do you think of the snippets you’ve gotten so far?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Yup. Just looked for ww2 photos on the web. I have a program on Canva that colorizes photos. I often have to make adjustments to the photo itself, download it, and re-upload it to get the right coloring. It’s quiet the process.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Aw, I’m glad you enjoy listening!
Wow. *whimper* I am soooo much slower than you! That’s just *poof* mindblowing.
Everyone says I have a gift, and I believe them. I believe words have power, and I also believe that any skill I have is from God. He designed my mind to work the way it does.
Do you outline and plot the story to g…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @loopylin @hybridlore @grcr @jonas
Leon and Julian —with Group 1
Julian crouched by Leon, who was slowly coming too. Everything was happening too fast, and he glanced about widely. “Leon, come on!”
Leon slowly sat up, a hand against his head. “What happened?”
“You got knocked out, and now we have someone knew w…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@rae   @savannah_grace2009
Ooo, that sounds great! I’d love to terrorize Chase and Sef.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Hey, have you read The Chosen by Chaim Potok?
It’s about two Jewish boys, and I kept thinking of you when I read it. I think you would really enjoy it if you haven’t.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I knew it was his wedding from the previous post. Just saying. lol.
Oh you nasty person.
Fine. Here.
A few minutes later, Josef stood in front of the mirror, black hat in hand. He adjusted the belt he wore over his coat and straightened his black tie one more time. Letting out a deep breath, he turned and moved into the kitchen,…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Nope. Good guess though. (I mean, they are, but that isn’t what I’m referring too. It’s something the adult’s aesthetics have, and the kid’s don’t.)
I colorized a lot of black and white photos from ww2, and then found a few more here and there.
YES! Liberty you got it!!! It is the rose!!!
No prob. If the animal…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
sure, lol. If you want. I don’t know when we stopped RPing. Maybe 440?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Thank you!!!
She is very sweet. I like her character a lot.
anyone catching a theme here?!?!
There’s something that is going to link all my adult characters……
Now I’m gonna throw you a loop by posting a child.
ERNST!!! Josef and Rosemarie’s oldest!!

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