Ellette Giselle

@smiley

Hello! I’m Ellette!

I think I’ve seen a few of your things while stocking KP before I became a member.

I guess I’ll introduce myself.

I’m a homeschool Senior. I’m reformed Baptist/Covenantor

I’m the oldest in my family.

I write Novels and Short stories, (I do some songs and poems, but they are generally for my story) I write fiction…[Read more]

@hybridlore

btw, I’m surprised the protection squad isn’t out in full force yet.

I guess Koshka and Elishiavet are behind.

@hybridlore

Yes, I am interested in what he says. It may just be a girl thing to catch stuff like that and it might go right over his head.

@hybridlore

Okay, so I have a question. Would you have still called it if Amelia hadn’t brought up wanting a baby in the letter to Sabina?

Did you call it the whole time, or was there any point that you actually thought she was sick.

Should I cut out the baby part in the letter to make this scene more stressful, or no?

 

Oh boy… this is n…

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12/28/24

Section 1.

(hopefully that will make it easier for anyone behind to organize these parts.) 😉

if this section was too long, then I can cut them down. Just let me know.

NEXT SECTION

The next morning, Joseph awoke to the banging of the back do…

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@freed_and_redeemed

This is good! I like this scene!

Wait, hang on……. you got him stuck there and now you don’t know what to do?!?!

Haha…… I may or may not have done that to a character before………

Honestly, George doesn’t seem very stable at the moment, If Riker gets out of the room and George follows and trips over something…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

You’re very welcome.

Also, why does that racoon picture have an expression that so fits what I know of you? lolololol.

@linus-smallprint

I have the same thought as Hybrid here. Beric has not only been independent for a while now, but he is also a teen. I’m glad you included the scene of his struggle to listen.

Thanks. It actually wasn’t in the first or second draft. I had a reference made to it in the third, but I thought I should flush it out into a full s…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Sounds good!

I’ll see if I can get at least one of your new sections done today.

Wonderful!! Thanks! Looking forward to it!

@linus-smallprint

Also, what about Andrew Peterson’s Carry the Fire? We both agreed on that one.

Okay yeah, we did. That one is a great song.

Oh, looks like you mentioned the editor question. Ignore my second offer. I thought you might have missed it.Glad you found a good person for the job!

😉

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know how to send doc. links. so, here are my answers.

The Narrow Path Trilogy: Book One – The Cost Feedback Questions

Character

~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Alan. Because he was the redemption character, and I LOVE redemption characters. If you look at my…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

My sister managed to get away with one-word answers for the questions I did for my first draft

lol. That sounds like my brother.

I’m on it. Give me one sec….

@liberty

one older brother

LUCKYYYYYYY!!!!! That’s why I like Phil so much. He’s my fictional older brother.

I’m the oldest with two younger brothers and a younger sister.

My friend actually had Summer of Suspense and lent it to me. I liked it so much I looked up the author to see if she wrote anything else, and then I discovered it was…[Read more]

@liberty

OH IT IS SO GOOD!

You must read it!

You won’t be able to put it down. It is stressful!!!

(Peder is my favorite character by the way.)

@liberty

No! I’ve never been to Highland games. That sounds AMAZING!

Have you?

My dad has the German. Our last name is actually German, and I look very German, though my brothers take after the highlander and irish side.

@hybridlore

Mainly just feedback. I have an actually editor who can catch typos, but if you see anything then you can mention it.

I hope Amelia doesn’t die.

Oh dear.

That would be an interesting twist—if everyone thinks she’s going to have the plague, but then she really ends up having a baby. But we shall see.

Hmm, it would be.…[Read more]

@liberty

Oh this is WAY better then Mufasa!

No, I haven’t. My family is waiting for a time when we can watch it without my very little sister. She couldn’t see a movie like that!

@liberty

Gahahaha!!! It’s sounds like Legolas and Aragorn looking for Gollum!

Is that good or bad? lolol

Alastair isn’t Gollum! *gasp* how horrid!

Hey…when you said this something struck me. Do you like Rolf so much because he’s German? *grin* I mean, this just reminds me of your German couple!

giggles sheepishly.

Well, being German as we…[Read more]

@liberty

It’s already available on Amazon Prime.

@liberty

I KNOW!!!!

We need The Hunt For Alastair, or something like that. Maybe Fergus and Jigson team up to find him!!

No, no, no! No Fergus and Abby. They would never work. They would kill each other! Rolf just seems so alive when he’s around Abby, and Abby seems so grown up around Rolf. Think of him coming into the kitchen of their own…[Read more]